hilate parde se chhanakar raushanee aatee hai , sheeshe ke bol men araaliyaa kee ek latar , kitaabon kee taand men ek grosaman , rilke kee naa samajhee koee kavitaa kee ek adad pnkti, chaay kee dukaan par aadhee pee gaee ek tootee cheenee mittee kee pyaalee , jhagadaaloo battakhon ke kaink kaink ke beech jraa saa (jo honaa hee thaa aisee sngat men ) gussaa aur mehataab miyaan ke namaaj ke vakt der karaate parde kee bahas karate hnsate kahate , dost ?
koltaaee kee film par dheeme baat karate , itavaar kee udaas dopahar do boond aansoo kee sngat men yaad karate baarish kee ek nam subah , barason pahale kee sookhee ghaas par rengate cheente , havaa men udte patnge , alasaaye bhunabhunaate bhaunre , kahate san daippald , ek bhutahaa kaalpanik rel jo jaane kis shahar liye jaataa mujhe ,vakt men sunn jngalaat , haree vaadee , maan ke ghane kaale kesh , aadee tirachhee kahaaniyaan , soonee sadken , chhaape kee vahee rngeen bachapan kee frok , ek meethee golee choosataa ladkaa dekhataa hai mud kar ab bhee , jaane kahaan chalaa gayaa , kis ajaane bhoogol , bnd hotee ek khidkee ke peechhe kaa dhundhalaataa snsaar , sunasaan steshan par rukee huee hai rel ab bhee hajaaron saal
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aap kaa aanaa…ujale dinon kee yaad saa…
bahut sundar...n jaane ateet ke kitane rediyo steshan apanaa sadiyon se rukaa prasaaran achaanak fir karane lage...ek saath :-)
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yadi snbhav ho sake to is prayaas me aapakaa saarthak saath paakar, aapake shabdon ko pustikaabaddh roop men dekhakar, hamen prasannataa hogee.
apanee tipannee se hamaaraa maargadarshan keejiye.
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bahut sundar...n jaane ateet ke kitane rediyo steshan apanaa sadiyon se rukaa prasaaran achaanak fir karane lage...ek saath
bahut dinon ke baad aapako padhaa .. badhiyaa lagee.. aabhaar...
dabe paanv aatee ho bheetar kaa sab kuchhh hilaane...:-)
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vaah, aapake is lekh ko padh kar jaane kyon pramod sinh jee kee yaad aa gayee..
kuchh to nayaa hai.... badhaaee!
bin aankhen bnd kie bhee sab kuchh jee letee hoon... aapake saath ...har baar :)
lay taal men thirakatee hai aapkee ek ek shabd....shukriyaa
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aapako janmadin ki haardik shubhakaamanaaen!
aap saarthak hon aur safal hon!
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main dinesh paareek aaj pahalee baar aapake blog pe aayaa hu aur aaj hee mujhe afsos karanaa pad rahaa hai kee main pahale kyoon naheen aayaa par shaayad ye to ishvar kee leelaa hai usane to samay seemaa nidhaarit kee hogee
baat yahaan main aapake blog kee kar rahaa hu par mere samajh se pare hai kee kahaa tak is kaa vimochan kar sakoo kyoon kee isake lie to mujhe bahut dinon tak likhanaa padegaa jo snbhav naheen hai haa baar baar aapake blog pe patikiryaa hee snbhav hai
ati soondar aur utane sundar se apane likhaa aur sajaayaa hai bas aapase gujaarish hai kee aap mere blog pe bhee aaye aur mere blog ke sadashay bane aur apane vichaaro se avagat karavaae
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