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1/25/2011

safed bagoole apanaa aasamaana


kisee din
abhee sochate kisee din
aayegaa kabhee ?
jab sooraj laal hogaa
aur aatmaa deept
jab nadee bahegee
shareer hogaa meethaa taral
shabd sngeet hogaa
dhoop hogee
raat bhee
teen tarah ke rng honge
kisee ke chehare par aayegaa
betarah pyaar
usake jaane binaa
jaananaa hogaa
ki ab bhee
khilataa hai ehasaas
jabaki lagataa thaa
itanee hinsaa
itanee beeensaafee
itanaa ghaav
itane dnsh
sokh kar
bhool jaatee aatmaa
oh jroor bhool jaatee hogee
aatmaa apanee aatmaa


kahate hain haathee
smriti kee chhaap
dhote hain peedhiyon tak
aur kabootar udte hain
hajaaron meel
cheetinyaan apanaa bil
safed bagule apane aasamaan
koee kachhuaa taalaab
main bachapan kee kaatee peetee kitaab

maan kahatee hain aise shabd
jinhen bhool gaee thee main
jaise bhool gaee thee dhoop men baithakar
moongafalee naheen chiniyaa badaam khaanaa
jaise bhool gaee thee riban
aur tortaayj shel vaale chashme
jaise ye bhee ki pahalee dafaa kab sunaa thaa
pndit bheemasen joshee ko
"knchan sinhaasan"
aur ab khojane par bhee naheen milataa yoo tyoob par
jaise lambe baal kaise bahan ne hnsate kaat daale the
jaan gaee thee mere kahe binaa ki
mujhase aise jhamele sadhate naheen
jaise jaanatee thee ye bhee binaa
mere kahe ki choodiyaan achchhee lagatee theen
aur padh sakatee thee raat bhar
main kitaab jaade ke dinon men
rajaaee ke bheetar torch jalaaye
aur rah sakatee thee bhookhee , poore din
maan se naaraaj hone par
lad sakatee thee kisee ke liye bhee
maheenon saal din
ki gussaa sulagataa thaa mere bheetar aag

ab kahatee hai bahan , tumhen pahachaananaa mushkil
jab kahatee hoon main , mere bheetar sukoon
jab kahatee hoon main , shabd mere bheetar jalate bhaap ke kund
jab kahatee hoon rishtedaaron ke dhokhe ab dikhate naheen
jab kahatee hoon koee pnchhee chakkar kaatataa uthataa hai
lagaataar bheetar
jab pooree naheen hotee kavitaa aur
adhooree chhootee rahatee kahaanee
laavaaris padaa rahataa ghar
aur chhootate bisoorate bachche hote
khud men magan
padhaa jaataa prem
aur pakaaee jaatee nafarat
seekhaa jaataa arshiyaa se bngaalee kasheedaakaaree
kee maheen harfen
aur huaa jaataa khush
tumhaaree hnsee ke gunagune ghoont men
aur samajhaayaa jaataa doston ko
ek baar fir
mohabbat men padne ko
aur bolaa jaataa jor se
aise shabd jo honthon aur jeebh par
chhodte bhaap
garm gulaab jaamun
tahajeebadaar , tameejdaar
hnsaa jaataa thathaakar beshaur
fir rokee jaatee hnsee
ki buraa naa maane koee
ki meree khushee doosaron ke
takaleef kaa sabab n bane
ki
kisee din
hogaa sab
jaise
honaa
likhaa hai
kisee din
kisee ek din

jaise prithvee
jaise pakshee
jaise dev
aur daanav
achchhaa aur buraa
jaise praanee simataa
ek bindu
mrityu
fir jeevan
aur isake beech kaa
mohak lambaa antaraal




(nnd kaatyaal kee penting )

15 comments:

paarul "pukharaaj" said...

is kahe men bahut svaad hai..

vaanee geet said...

itanee hinsaa itanee beeensaafee itanaa ghaav itane dnsh sokh kar bhool jaatee ...
aatmaa hotee to kaise bhoolatee ..

chiniyaa baadaam saalon baad is shabd ko padhanaa achchhaa lagaa ...moongafalee men vo svaad kahaan :)

Satish Chandra Satyarthi said...

kyaa khoob likhaa hai!!!
badhaaee...

praveen paandey said...

yah prateekshaa sab samete hai.

Rahul Singh said...

madhur bhaavon kaa sahaj pravaah.

Aparna Manoj Bhatnagar said...

jaise chitr kheench detaa hai koee
aankh ke kainavaas par
utar jaate hain safed bagoole
ek aasamaan
...... kitanaa vistaar hai ; sundar ! behad khoobasoorat ! pratyakshaa..

svapnadarshee said...

fantabulous!

do .anuraag said...

.koee din....jindagaanee or hai....

love the way you write......

sabake paas hotaa hai ek din......

do. nootan dimaree gairolaa- neeti said...

bahut sundar likhaa hai aapane..
.aapakee rachanaatmak ,khoobasoorat aur bhaavamayee
prastuti bhee aaj ke charchaa mnch kaa aakarshan banee hai
aaj (28/1/2011) ke charchaa mnch par apanee post
dekhiyegaa aur apane vichaaron se charchaamnch par aakar
avagat karaaiyegaa aur hamaaraa hausalaa badhaaiyegaa.
http://charchamanch.uchcharan.com

atul prakaash trivedee said...

kahate hain haathee
smriti kee chhaap
dhote hain peedhiyon tak
aur kabootar udte hain
hajaaron meel
cheetinyaan apanaa bil
safed bagule apane aasamaan
koee kachhuaa taalaab
main bachapan kee kaatee peetee kitaaba|


bahut hee bhaav pravaah lie pnktiyaan |
bahut dinon baad kuchh padhkar, bahut achchhaa lagaa |

deepti sharmaa said...

bahut sunder
sara kuch kah diya aapne to
...

lazy lamhe said...

aapko pad kar bahut achchha lagta hai....anchhui baatein aap sarlta se kah jati hai jo dil ko chhu jati hai..
i am in love with ur words !

mridula pradhan said...

bahut sunder likhi hain.

aavesh said...

aaj men beete hue kal ko dekhane kee koshish saahasik hai |kabhee kunthaa naheen hotee udhar dekh kar ?yaa fir bhoot ko bhee daayaron men baant rakhaa hai ?jo bhee ho ,achchhee kavitaa

neeraj basaliyaal said...

achchhee lagee