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isee duniyaa men,sunaa hai ke rahaa karate the

kaise the log , bilaashart vafaa karate the

mit gayaa teraa yakeen,apanee jubaan bnd huee

varanaa ham hee the har ik baat kahaa karate the

is badee baat pe matalab hai kyaa khmoshee kaa

jraa-see baat pe kyaa jhagade huaa karate the

bas ek lamhe ke patthar ne hai rokaa varanaa

dariyaae-vakt ke hamaraah chalaa karate the

aaj to dil ke nishaane pe thaa unakaa har teer

vaar to karate the,kuchh teer khtaa karate the

kyaa vahaan ab bhee hain un kdamon kee aahat ke nishaan

kisse jis mod kee khushaboo ke sunaa karate the

naaumeedee kaa vahee daur hai kyaa fir "kundan"

jab n karate the davaa aur n duaa karate the

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yoonivarsitee poleeteknik men svarachit kavitaa pratiyogitaa kaa bhavy aayojan

muraadaabaad: teerthnkar mahaaveer yooneevarsitee ke maananeey kulaadhipati shree suresh jain jee, grup vaais cheyaramen shree maneesh jain jee, kulapati pro. aar.ke. mittal jee tathaa kulasachiv pro. aar.ke. mudagal jee kee preranaa evn poleeteknik kaalej ke praachaary pro. tee.pee. agravaal, deen em. aar. khuraanaa aur sahaayak kulasachiv nitin agravaal ke vishesh sahayog se poleeteknik kaalej ke pratham evn dviteey varsh ke chhaatr-chhaatraaon ke lie svarachit kavitaa pratiyogitaa kaa aayojan dinaank 9 maee budhavaar, aparaanh 2 baje, lekchar thietar men kiyaa gayaa. kaaryakram kaa shubhaarambh sarvashree maaheshvar tivaaree, shacheendr bhatanaagar, mahesh divaakar, praachaary pro. tee.pee. agravaal, em. aar. khuraanaa, es. see. singhal, nitin agravaal dvaaraa maan sarasvatee kee archanaa ev vndanaa se huaa.



is kaaryakram men 14 pratibhaagiyon- abhishek kumaar, abhishek mishraa, sifaat haidar, jonee kumaar, julfekaar alee, dharmendr kumaar, dinesh kumaar, pradeep kumaar, mohammad yoosuf, shamashaad ahamad, sumit paandey, kritikaa raakesh, vaibhav shuklaa ne bhaag liyaa. is pratiyogitaa men chhaatron ko apanee svayn kee likhee huee kavitaa 'svarachit kavitaa pratiyogitaa' ke snyojakon (avaneesh sinh chauhaan evn anuraadhaa pnvaar) ko prastut karanee thee. taduparaant nirnaayak mndal ke sammaanit sadasyon dvaaraa chayanit rachanaaon ke rachanaakaaron ko pratiyogitaa men bhaag lene kee anumati pradaan kee gayee. pratiyogitaa men bhaag lene par rachanaaon ke kathy evn prastuteekaran ke aadhaar par nirnaayak mndal ke sammaanit sadasyon- sarvashree shacheendr bhatanaagar, maaheshvar tivaaree evn mahesh divaakar ne apanaa nirnay sunaayaa jisamen kritikaa raakesh, dharmendr kumaar tathaa julfekaar alee evn vaibhav shuklaa (snyukt roop se) ko kramashh pratham, dviteey evn triteey sthaan praapt huaa. is kaaryakram ke snyojak avaneesh sinh chauhaan aur anuraadhaa pnvaar rahe.



is avasar par varishth geetakaar maaheshvar tivaaree jee ne kahaa ki yah pratiyogitaa apane aap men mahatvapoorn hai kyonki isake maadhyam se yuvaa peedhee ko apanee soch evn rachanaatmakataa ko prakat karane kaa sunaharaa avasar milaa hai. varishth kavi shacheendr bhatanaagar jee ne kahaa ki takaneekee chhaatron ko kavitaa se jodnaa ek achchhee pahal kahee jaa sakatee hai jisase chhaatron men saamaajik chetanaa aayegee. varishth saahityakaar mahesh divaakar jee ne kahaa ki yaantrikee ko snvedanaa se jodkar yadi aaj ke yuvaa kaary karenge to unake kaary maanav kee bhalaaee ke lie hee honge, vinaash ke lie kadaapi naheen. pro. tee. pee agravaal ne kahaa ki hamaare chhaatr kavitaa ke maadhyam se n keval snskaar seekhenge balki samaaj ko bhee snskaarit karenge. deen em. aar. khuraanaa ne apane vaktavy men kahaa ki isase chhaatron men kriyetivitee aayegee. nitin agravaal ne kahaa ki ki saahity srijan aur paathan se chhaatron men chetanaa aayegee. avaneesh sinh chauhaan ne kahaa ki aaj kee yuvaa peedhee saahity se katatee chalee jaa rahee hai; is tarah ke aayojan unamen saahity ke prati abhiruchi paidaa karenge. jabaki anuraadhaa pnvaar ne kahaa ki is pratiyogitaa ke maadhyam se chhaatron ko jahaan saahity kee mahattaa ko samajhaane kaa avasar milaa hai vaheen ve achchhe moolyon ko apanaakar apanaa jeevan sundar banaayenge .



kaaryakram ko suchaaroo roop se snpann karaane ke lie chhaatr-chhaatraaon ko samay-samay par kavitaa kee baareekiyon se avagat karaayaa gayaa aur unakaa maargadarshan kiyaa gayaa thaa, jisamen avaneesh sinh chauhaan, anuraadhaa pnvaar, varun jhaa, kaartikey, varshaa vats, jareen faaruk kaa vishesh sahayog rahaa. is aayojan se ek din poorv in chhaatron kee rachanaaon ko poorvaabhaas par bhee prakaashit kiyaa gayaa taaki intaranet ke paathak in yuvaaon ke rachanaakarm se parichit ho saken. is avasar par sarvashree maynk pnvaar, avaneesh chauhaan (haridvaar), snjeev chauhaan, abhinav saksenaa, aravind gaud, e. em. khaan, sachin chaudharee, anshu, nidhi varmaa, kaartikey, paayal, varshaa vats, es.bee rastogee, jitesh sinh, himaanshu sharmaa, e. ke. sinh, ankit baajapeyee, vivek, neelofar, sntosh gngavaar, haidar alee, varun guptaa, mo. mukeem, navaneet sainee, pradeep ambedakar, roochi agravaal, puneet kumaar, dee.em garg, amit sharmaa , mustafaa ahamad, tee.dee. saksenaa, sonoo chauhaan, saurabh bhatanaagar, gaurav sinh, kriti varmaa, anjanaa chaudharee, mo. umar, kumud raanaa evn yoonivarsitee ke chhaatr-chhaatraaen upasthit the. mnch kaa snchaalan avaneesh sinh chauhaan ne kiyaa.

abr kaa ek mukhtasar tukadaa

aaj main dhoop men chalaa hoon bahut

raah men koee gulamohar bhee n thaa

dhoop men ik gjb kee hiddat thee

aur bahut door aasamaanon par

abr kaa ek mukhtasar tukadaa

kuchh tasallee -see de rahaa yoon

jaise ke meree chhotee-see betee

mujhase kahatee hai raakshas jo kabhee

mujhape hamalaa kare to apanee chhadee

se vo aisaa karegee jaadoo kuchh

(kyonki vo to paree hai nanheen ik)

jisase tote kee jaan nikal jaae

jisamen basatee hai raakshas kee jaan

aur aisaa vo kahake mujhase turat

pyaar se yoon lipat jo jaatee hai

jaise ke meree mukhtasar duniyaa

saare rnjo-alam se khaalee hai

aaj lautaa hoon jab thakaa-haaraa

jhan men mere chhotaa-saa tukadaa

haan,vo chhotaa-saa tukadaa baadal kaa

saaf vo aa rahaa hai kitanaa najr

aur jis par hai naksh nanheen paree

“ khushee kee aankh men aansoo kee bhee jagah rakhanaa... pranay priynvad

khabar ko mukaam

aakhir khabar ko mukaam milaa...aaryan teebee par aayee khabar ne aisaa asar dikhaayaa ki vidhaan parishad ke upasabhaapati judvaan bahanen sabaa aur farahaa ke ghar pahunch gae...upasabhaapati ne apane vivekaanudaan se 50 hajaar roopae madad dene kee baat kahee...unhonne samaaj ke any logon se bhee aage aane kee apeel kee... is judvaa bahanon kee kahaanee saal dedh saal pahale bhee hamane dikhaaee thee...lekin fir se ise isalie dikhaanaa padaa ki hamen isake bhaaee tamannaa ne fon kar kahaa...hamaaree bahanon kee haalat achchhee naheen hai...ghar men n davaa ke paise hain aur n dhng kaa khaanaa....tamannaa ne hamase madad kee guhaar lagaaee....aise men hamaaraa farj thaa ki samaaj ke antim paayadaan ke aadamee kee aavaaj sunee jaae....hamane is khabar ko pramukhataa se dikhaaee....donon betiyon kee vo fariyaad bhee aap tak aur sarakaar tak pahunchaaee jisamen unhonne kahaa ki –“neeteesh ankal hamen maut do do yaa davaa de do”... aise jeene se kyaa faayadaa....is dard ko aap mahasoos sakate hain...khabar men hamane ye bhee dikhaayaa ki donon bahanon men se ek ke paas hee kidanee hai jisase donon kaa kaam chalataa hai...gareebee aisee ki esbestes ke chhat ke neeche donon kaat rahee hain jindagee...shauch se lekar tamaam tarah kee mushkilen paravaar vaale kaise snbhaalate hain ye sab badaa dukhad hai... khabar kaa asar ye huaa ki bihaar vidhaan parishad ke upasabhaapati saleem paravej...sabaa-farahaa ke ghar par pahunche....ekaaek pahunchane par ghar vaale bhee aashcharyachakit rah gae...sabhaapati ne islaam kaa paath judvaan betiyon ko padhaayaa aur kahaa ki kuraan ichchhaa mrityu kee ijaajat naheen detaa....isalie vakt se pahale maut maanganaa gunaah hai. unhonne apane vivekaanudaan se madad ke lie 50 hajaar roopae dene kee baat kahee. sabaa farahaa ke lie samaaj ke khushahaal logon se saleem paravej ne madad kee guhaar bhee lagaaee.... paravej ne bataayaa ki unhen bhee do betiyaan aur in donon judvaan betiyon kaa dard ve mahasoos kar sakate hain.....aaryan teevee ke saath baatacheet men unhonne ek sher padhaa---
“ khushee kee aankh men aansoo kee bhee jagah rakhanaa...
bure jamaane kabhee poochh kar naheen aate ” .
saleem paravej ne aaryan teevee ko dhanyavaad diyaa ki isee teevee kee vajah se ve donon betiyon kaa dard jaan paae. upasabhaapati ne aanevaale samay men bhee judvaan betiyon ko madad karate rahane kaa aashvaasan diyaa. taaraakaant jhaa ke sabhaapati pad se hatane ke baad upasabhaapati rahate hue sabhaapati ke saare kaaryon kaa nishpaadan abhee saleem paravej hee kar rahe hain. khabar par upasabhaapati kee snvedanaa ko ham salaam karate hain aur ek baar fir duharaate hain – “ ham hain aaryan aapakee aavaaj ”. ye bataate hue hamen garv hai bhee hai aur sntosh bhee ki ye khabar sirf aaryan teevee par hee dikhaaee gaee thee. ek riportar ke lie isase jyaadaa sntosh kee baat kyaa ho sakatee hai ki usakee khabar se samaaj ke laachaar aur antim paayadaan par khade insaan ko raahat mile.

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meethe pal the ,talkh the lamhe,kitanaa kyaa kuchh yaad rahe
apanaa ujadnaa hee achchhaa hai ,achchhaa tum aabaad rahe

har lamhe kee shirayaanon men bahatee thee bas bechainee
isakaa hee to radde-amal thaa , har lamhaa ham shaad rahe

koyal kookee ,titalee lahakee ,gulamohar ke bahake fool
baat hai kyaa fitarat ke lab par ek-n-ik friyaad rahe

hamane badan ke chaaron jaanib daam-saa ik mahasoos kiyaa
garache najr to aae n hamako ,vo pakke sayyaad rahe

tumako samajh men aaye n aaye hamako bas kah denaa hai
sher kahen, tashareeh kee 'kundana' hamape kyoon bedaad rahe

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ye aaj kaa safr to ...
shaayad safr kee shaam men utaregee ek nazm
tanahaa safr men jaise koee raah-rau mile
kuchh baaten jo dil men raheen kaheen bhee n kah sakaa
un lafz ko to sharfe-samaaat zaraa mile
is aaj ke safr kee to har baat hai maaloom
kyaa ibtadaa thee aur kahaan khtmesafar hai
haan ,lag rahe hain ped ye ,ye khet ,ye raahen
kuchh ajanabee -see fir bhee ye anajaan to naheen
bevajah intashaar ke saamaan to naheen
lekin isee safr ke jo andar safr hai ik
chalanaa hai jisape is safr ke baad bhee mujhako
vo kis qadar anajaan hai,kitanaa vo gair hai
jisamen harek lamhe ke andar hain kitane raaj
jisamen n rahaguzaar kaa koee siraa mile
jisamen n mnzilon kaa koee bhee pataa chale
jisamen n koee rakhtesafar aur n hamasafar
saamaanesafar jisamen to laagr badan hee hai
haan,vo badan ke jisamen hain bechainiyaan bharee
lamhaa vo hogaa sochataa hoon kis qadar muheeb
kitanee kathin-see hogee vo jarraahate -lamhaa
laagr badan se jabake judaa hogaa intashaar
aur ik safr jo hogaa kabhee jism ke sivaa
bechainiyon ko saath lie chalanaa hee hogaa
jisamen n hogaa mnzilon kaa koee bhee suraag
jisamen vajoode -vakt bhee mit jaaegaa aakhir
shaayad vahee safr to hai sadiyon se muntajir
ye aaj kaa safr to fkt ik nakeeb hai
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honaa naheen thaa jisako vahee aaj ho gayaa

duniyaa men numaayaan thaa ,kamare men kho gayaa

jo shor machaataa huaa ehasaas thaa dil men

bachche kee tarah thak ke vo bistar pe so gayaa

main vakt ke chataan pe yoon khushk khadaa thaa

baadal kee tarah yaad kaa lamhaa bhigo gayaa

chehare pe ubharataa hee naheen koee taaaassur

ai keemiyaagar ,mom bhee patthar-saa ho gayaa

ek sahamaa-saa aansoo jo dare-dil pe khadaa thaa

'kundana' mere tamaam gunaahon ko dho gayaa

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kuchh to maasoomiyat ,javaanee kuchh

baat lagatee hai ye puraanee kuchh

hai jbaradast ik kashish isamen

maanaa duniyaa hai aanee-jaanee kuchh

haakime-shahr, too khudaa to naheen

soch, teraa bhee hogaa saanee kuchh

aapakee bajm to snjeedaa hai

rusavaa karatee hai shaadamaanee kuchh

is kdar kyoon thahar gayaa hai vakt

dekh ,lamhe men hai ravaanee kuchh

aaj kaa khoon kal jiyaa degaa

garache tum loge jindagaanee kuchh

jab bhee poochhaa hai haal ai 'kundana'

chhed dete ho tum kahaanee kuchh

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gjl

aayaa jraa sukoon men chaunkaa diyaa mujhe

mujhase n poochh jindagee ne kyaa diyaa mujhe

ik dilafreb saayaa thaa ik lamhe kee khaatir

garache ik umr ke lie bharamaa diyaa mujhe

besharmiyon ke beech bhee jeenaa hai ek fn

har baar khtaa usane kee ,sharamaa diyaa mujhe

kitane saboot le ke gayaa thaa main usake paas

fir se ameere-shahr ne samajhaa diyaa mujhe

karavaayaa gayaa naarasaaiyon kaa mujhe mashk

aisaa bhee ho kinaare pe pahunchaa diyaa mujhe

ik roshanee huee thee jo tootaa tilisme-jaat

gumanaamiyon ne fir koee rootabaa diyaa mujhe

jo thaa shajar khud aanch men apanee thaa jal rahaa

'kundana' kahaa ye sabane ke saayaa diyaa mujhe

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gjl

saharaa men goonjatee huee benaam sadaa hoon

patthar kee tarah vakt ke seene pe jamaa hoon

ab paas hifaajt ke lie kuchh bhee naheen hai

jngal men khvaahishaat ke main khaufjdaa hoon

mittee hoon to dhal jaanaa hai paikar men mujhe bhee

aajaad tamannaa lie hairaan khadaa hoon

lamhaab lamhaa mujhase hee fisalaa meraa vajood

har shakhsh se ab apanaa pataa poochhataa hoon main

har baar yahee lagataa hai ye ibtadaa hee hai

garache huee ik umr ke main ghar se chalaa hoon

ai jindagee ,charche men rahee teree sakhaavat

ik main ke tere dar pe to bevajah padaa hoon

'kundana'kabhee aatee thee khmoshee kee sadaa ik

ab shor hai vo baat koee sun n rahaa hoon

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