main paryatan par naineetaal naheen aayaa. agar aayaa hotaa to yahaan kee bheed aur shaanepnjaaba/sherepnjaab hotal kee roshanee, jheel men tairatee batakh numaa naaven, kacharaa aur kuchh n kuchh khareedane/khaane kee snskriti ko dekh paryatan kaa maayane kho baithataa.
paise kharch kar sootakes bhar kar ghar lautanaa kyaa paryatan hai? yaa ab jab foto kheechanaa/veediyo banaanaa sarv sulabh ho gayaa hai, tab pinkee/babalee/pappoo ke saath san set kaa drishy utaaranaa bhar hee paryatan hai?
pataa naheen, main bahut shyor naheen hoon. main isapar bhee pakkee tarah se naheen hunkaaree bhar sakataa ki falaanee devee yaa falaane hanumaan jee ko matthaa tek peelee plaastik kee panniyon men unake prasaad ke roop men laacheedaanaa le lautanaa bhee paryatan hai. maine kaathagodaam utar kar seedhe naineetaal kee daud naheen lagaaee. mujhe vahaan aur raaste ke angrejee bording skoolon men bhee aakarshit naheen kiyaa. ek kaa bhee naam yaad naheen rakh sakaa.
draaivar ne bataayaa ki kaathagodaam men kabristaan hai. meree ruchi vahaan jaa kar unapar lagee plek padhane men thee. draaivar vahaan le naheen gayaa. par vah fir kabhee karoongaa. mujhe raste ke cheed ke aasamaan ko cheerate vrikshon men mohit kiyaa. aur main yah pachhataayaa ki mujhe kavitaa karanee kyon naheen aatee. dhaabe kee chaay, raastaa chhenkatee bakariyaan, pahaadee topee pahane jhurreedaar boodhaa, bhooskhalan, door pahaad ke oopar deekhatee ek kutiyaa – ye sab lage paryatan ke hisse.
khair, yah mujhe samajh aataa hai ki sootakes bhar kar ghar lautane kee prakriyaa paryatan naheen hai.
cheed ke ped, dhaan ke khet, paakad ke vriksh, pahaadee sarpil gaulaa nadee shaayad apanee saundary samriddhi men magan the. par agar ve dekhate to yah anubhav karate ki jnyaanadatt kaa dhyaan apanee ghadee aur apane pars par naheen thaa – vah unase kuchh baat karanaa chaahataa thaa. vah abhee paryatak banaa naheen hai. abhee samajh rahaa hai paryatan kaa arth.
itanee jindagee bitaa lee. kabhee to nikalegaa vah saarthak paryatan par!
meraa saarthak paryatan kahanaa shaayad utanaa hee saarthak hai jitanaa apanee pustak ko samarpit karatee ajnyey kee ye pnktiyaan:
ek praacheen girajaaghar se lage huye ek bhikshu-vihaar men baith kar
anyamanask bhaav se yah kahanaa ki "main jaanataa hoon
ek din main fakeer ho jaaoongaa."
itanee jindagee bitaa lee. kabhee to nikalegaa vah saarthak paryatan par!
ReplyDeletesaarthak paryatan ke sandarbh men main sandarbh men hamakhayaal hain ham. shaayad paryatan to ghar se baahar nikalate hee shuroo ho jaatee hai.
shukriyaa ,
ReplyDeletesher aur paryatan ,donon 'saarthak' lage
bhaaee ..aapakaa lekh padhane se pahale main bhee yahee sochataa thaa ...prakriti ke saundary kaa aannd letaa thaa ....mere lie bhee ab paryatan ke maane badal gae hai ....kabhee mere blog par bhee padhaare bade bhaaee
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ajnyey yah likh sakate the kyon ki ve fakeer naheen the lekin baabaa naagaarjun? aur main ....
ReplyDelete.... aur paryatan kaa arth baabaa naagaarjun aur raahul saankrityaayan ke jeevan se jaanaa jaa sakataa hai.
ReplyDeleteprakriti ke saundary kaa rasaasvaadan naheen kiyaa .. us kshetr ke jeevan aur saanskritik khoobiyon par najar naheen padee .. to paryatan saarthak kaise ho sakataa hai ??
ReplyDeleterochak kavitaa hai.
ReplyDeletepooraa vishvaas hai ki is blog kaa sheershak fakeeraanaa halachal naheen hogaa aane vaale samay men.
hamaare lie jab kabhee roj kaa ruteen se hatakar apane kaama/chintaa/smasyaaen ko bhoolakar kuchh alag hee karate hain to ham paryatak ban jaate hain.
ReplyDeletekabhee kabhee to isake lie ghar se baahar nikalanaa hee naheen padataa.
aajakal ham antarajaal-paryatan khoob karate hain.
aimless browsing karate karate kabhee kabhee ham kuchh aisee jagah par pahnch jaate hain jahaan se nikalanaa mushkil ho jaataa hai.
nainee taal kabhee naheen gayaa. bahut sunaa hoon is jagah ke baare men.
aashaa hai ek din asalee paryatak banakar vahaan jaane kaa avasar milegaa.
shubhakaamanaaen
jnyaan jee,
ReplyDeletemain moolat: aapako gady kaa blaagar (lekhak jaanaboojh kar naheen likhaa), lekin is pravishtee men pady kee jhalak bhee hai. bahut achchhaa lagaa .
paryatan kaa asalee sukh peeth par ek baikapaik laade saste men desh videsh kee sair karane men hai, jaisaa ki mere ek mitr taad karate hain. unake blaag ko dekhiyegaa kabhee (visheshakar unakee pichhale saal bhaarat aur is saal yoorop vaalee pravishtiyaan)
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yahaan par mere ek mitr ne amerikaa men bhaarateeyon kee ek aadat par dhyaan dilaayaa jise vo patelagiree kahate hain. is aadat kaa uddeshy hai ki jahaan jaao jyaadaa se jyaadaa foto kheenchakar kaimaraa bhar lo is aas men ki baad men dekhane ke liye yaaden rahengee. jabaki aisaa karate huye aap theek us kshan us drishy kaa anubhav karane se apane ko vnchit kar lete hain.
film nemasek pataa naheen aapane dekhee yaa naheen, lekin usakaa ek drishy meree samajh se paryatan ko paribhaashit karataa hai. hotaa yoon hai ki pitaa apane chhote bachche ke saath samudr kee laharon ko dekh rahaa hotaa hai aur foto kheenchane chaahataa hai lekin vo kaimaraa saath laanaa bhool gayaa hai. is par vo apane bete se kahataa hai ki is drashy ko hameshaa yaad rakhanaa apane man men, yahee shaayad paryatan hai.
isake alaavaa paryatan ekadam akele karane kaa bhee apanaa hee majaa hai.
aapako kavitaa karanee naheen aatee, sahamat!! magar aaj ye kahaa se?
ReplyDeletemain to paryatan ke arth samajhatee hoon ki us shahar kee saanskritik dharoharon ko jaananaa aur samajhanaa. us shahar kee mittee men kaun see aitihaasik khushaboo basee hai use jaananaa. ataichee bharane kaa naam to bilkul bhee naheen hai paryatan. bas man kee atechee bharane kaa naam hee hai paryatan.
ReplyDeletejaldee se banen paryatak...
ReplyDelete'athaato ghumakkadee...' aur 'ek boond sahasaa...' jaisee pustaken to maanon paryatan paathyakram kee aisee pustake hain, jinase paryatan kee digree naheen milegee, ghoomanaa chaahe seekh len, fir yah apanee pasnd hai ki kisake paryatan kaa uddeshy ghumakkadee hai aur kise pareekshaa men nnbar haasil kar digree lenee hai.paryatan men naapaas, mainne paryatan n seekh paane kee daastaan bayaan karane kee koshish apanee pichhalee post 'filmee patanaa' men kee hai.
ReplyDeleteparyatan meree samajh men tan aur man ko nayaapan dene ke liye honaa chaahiye. main habad habad men bahut sthaan chhoo lene ke chakr men naheen rahataa hoon apitu aaraam se aur dheere dheere prakriti kaa aanand lene par vishvaas rakhataa hoon.
ReplyDeletemere khyaal se aaj kee taareekh men paryatan kee kaee kismen aur unake bhinn bhinn uddeshy hain jo is ek shabd ko kaee arth dete hain .
ReplyDeleteachchhaa prashn uthaayaa hai .
main bataataa hoon apane man kee baat is baare men.
ReplyDeleteparyatan hai ataichee bhar kar aur pars khaalee karake ghar vaapas lautanaa.
jabaki aap jis cheej kee baat kar rahe hain vo ghumakkadee hai. ghumakkadee men aadamee naa to apane pars ko khaalee hone detaa aur naa hee ataichee bharane detaa.
@ neeraj jaat jee - sahee! shaayad paryatan shabd nav dhanaadhyataa ne hadap liyaa hai. yaa sahee shabd deshaatan yaa ghumakkadee ho.
ReplyDeletejo bhee ho, meraa aashay spasht hai. shabd ko kyaa chheelanaa? usake liye ajita/abhaya/anoop hain n!
hamaare yahaan dongar maafiyaa kaa prakop hai| har chhotee pahaadiyon aur dongar par mndir ug aaye hain, jaane kahaan se aur fir laaudaspeekar ke shor aur plaastik panniyon kee baadh se jngal pat jaate hain| maanav bastee se door pahaadiyon par sharan lie vany praanee aise men jaaen to jaaen kahaan----
ReplyDeletemanushy ke kadam jahaan padate hain gndagee pahunch jaatee hai| mahaaraashtr kaa kaas kshetr jngalee foolon ke lie prasidd hai| yahaan hajaaron kee snkhyaa men paryatak aane lage hain| jin jngalee foolon ke lie kaas prasiddh hai unhee jngalee foolon ko raundakar paarking kee jaatee hai|
chalie koee to milaa jise barbaadee laane vaale paryatan se prem naheen-----
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paryatan hai ataichee bhar kar aur pars khaalee karake ghar vaapas lautanaa.
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puraanee yaade!
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knpanee ne hamaaraa posting dakshinee koreyaa men teen mahine ke lie kiyaa thaa.
mere mitr bhee saath the.
rahane ke lie teen maheene kaa Daily allowance, US Dollar men advance men le gayaa thaa.
mere mitron ke lie vah kaafee naheen thaa kyonki ve to apane upar adhik kharch karate the.
ham to seedhe saade aadamee hain. hamaare paas, teen mahine ke baad kuchh dollar bach hue the.
keval ise kharch karane ke lie lautate samay ham singaapor hote hue aae.
singapor men pahunchate hee ek sootakes khareedee aur serngoon rod par muhmmad mustaafaa kaa vah mashahoor dookaan par jaakar, andhaadhundh khareedee kee. sootakes bhar gayaa thaa aur pars khaalee huaa.
idhar se patni fon par shopping list bataa rahee thee!
is shopping aur purse emptying kee chakkar men hamane theek se singaapor dekhee hee naheen. us umr men ham to immature the.
paryatan karanaa jaanate bhee naheen the.
aaj, is umr men meraa soch bilakul alag hai. khaalee haath jaaungaa, khaalee haath lautoongaa aur jaisaa ajeet guptaajee kahatee hain "man kee ataichee" ko bharoongaa. haal hee men meraa amareekaa kaa pravaas is shrenee men aataa hai.
shubhakaamanaaen
jee vishvanaath
paryatak ko jo bhaaye, so paryatan kaa taatpary hai usake lie.
ReplyDeletemagar aapakaa gady pady kee khushaboo dene lagaa hai. :) badhaaee. kam se kam itanaa to bhar hee laaye aap jholee men paryatan se.
prakriti se nirantar samvaadarat rahate hue khud ko talaashate rahanaa aur kabhee tript, santusht n honaa paryatan naheen?
ReplyDeleteparyatan apane aap men ek ziliyan dolar indastree hai. kitanee kampaniyaan akhabaaron men poore panne ke vijnyaapan chhapavaatee hain, kaee baar unamen shoping bhee karaane ke aofar hote hain.
ReplyDeletekhair mere lie paryatan sirf khud ke saath rahane aur ajanabee jagah aur ajanabee logon se milanaa hotaa hai.
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aapakee najr se naineetaal kaa vivaran padhane me majaa aayegaa .
ReplyDeletesair sapaataa shaayad jyaadaa sateek aur saarthak hai -
ReplyDeletesair kar duniyaa kee gaafil ki ye jindagee fir kahaan
jindagee gar hai bhee to ye naujavaanee fir kahaan ?
sair sapaate kee ek umr hotee hai -
kismat pe us musaafire bekas ke roeeye ,
jo thak gayaa ho raah men mnjil ke saamane
ye post kavitaa hee to hai!
ReplyDeletemain
paryatan par
naineetaal naheen aayaa.
agar aayaa hotaa
to yahaan kee bheed
aur hotal kee roshanee,
jheel men tairatee
batakh numaa naaven,
kacharaa
aur
kuchh n kuchh
khareedane/khaane
kee snskriti dekh
paryatan ke maayane kho baithataa.
paise kharch kar
sootakes bhar kar
ghar lautanaa kyaa paryatan hai?
yaa ab
jab foto kheechanaa
veediyo banaanaa sarv sulabh ho gayaa hai,
tab pinkee/babalee/pappoo ke saath
san set kaa drishy utaaranaa bhar hee paryatan hai?
manoj kumaar jee kaa
ReplyDeletehaardik dhanyavaad
unhonne hamen
ek kshan men hee
sikhaa diyaa
kaise kavitaa
likhee jaatee hai.
jnyaanajee se
yah anurodh hai
ki meree
is kavitaa ko
ultee yukti se
gady men badalakar
meree tippnee samajhen.
shubhakaamanaaen
jee vishvanaath
(bengaloor sthit kukhyaat quack kavi)
haa haa haa... :D
ReplyDeleteye bolatee huee pnktiyaan, ye bolate hue chitr, ye sab ek kavitaa kee hee rachanaa to karate hain. agar aapako buraa n lage to kshamaayaachanaa sahit kahane kee dhrishtataa karanaa chaahoongaa ki aap jab yaatraa par nikalate hain to aapake blog ke vishay rich ho jaate hai. jab aap ilaahaabaad men rahte hain to aap....
ReplyDeletekaash aap jyaadaa yaatraayen karen aur aur jyaadaa likhen.
ajee ham to sard desh me rahate he, or garmiyo me garm desh mai jaa kar khub ghumate bhee he, dhup bhee lete he, bachat bhee karate he, jab gaye hee he to fotoo or vidiyo bhee kheench lete he, kharch to hotaa he hee he lekin pars khaalee kar ke nahee aate, or yahee garmee hame fir se javaan banaa detee he, ab ise aap kuchh bhee samajhe, majaburee yaa paryatan ham to ise chhuttiyaan manaanaa kahate he, is saal hamaare yahaan khub garmee rahee to ghar me hee chhuttiyaa manaa lee :)
ReplyDeleteham ne to aaj tak prayatan kaa arth hee nahee samajhaa. aapase hee sun rahe hain--- kaheen jaate jo nahee. shubhakaamanaayen
ReplyDeleteparyatan to doobate sooraj ke saath 'leelyo taahi madhur fal jaanee' vaalee mudraa men fotoo khinchavaanaa hee hai. (ye mudraa shiv bhaiyaa kee kisee post men thee). baakee shabd naa bhee chhilen to asal cheej to vahee hai jo 'ghumakaddee' se nikalataa hai. binaa kisee plaan ke kaheen nikalie kabhee jholaa leke, bahut aannd aaegaa. plaan kar ke gae to kyaa gae. aur kaheen bhee toorist pleses ko chhodakar baakee jagahon men bhatakane men jyaadaa aannd hai. aapakee saaikil-kam-pad yaatraa bhee abhee pending hai !
ReplyDeleteparyatan to doobate sooraj ke saath 'leelyo taahi madhur fal jaanee' vaalee mudraa men fotoo khinchavaanaa hee hai. (ye mudraa shiv bhaiyaa kee kisee post men thee). baakee shabd naa bhee chhilen to asal cheej to vahee hai jo 'ghumakaddee' se nikalataa hai. binaa kisee plaan ke kaheen nikalie kabhee jholaa leke, bahut aannd aaegaa. plaan kar ke gae to kyaa gae. aur kaheen bhee toorist pleses ko chhodakar baakee jagahon men bhatakane men jyaadaa aannd hai. aapakee saaikil-kam-pad yaatraa bhee abhee pending hai !
ReplyDeleteajee ham to sard desh me rahate he, or garmiyo me garm desh mai jaa kar khub ghumate bhee he, dhup bhee lete he, bachat bhee karate he, jab gaye hee he to fotoo or vidiyo bhee kheench lete he, kharch to hotaa he hee he lekin pars khaalee kar ke nahee aate, or yahee garmee hame fir se javaan banaa detee he, ab ise aap kuchh bhee samajhe, majaburee yaa paryatan ham to ise chhuttiyaan manaanaa kahate he, is saal hamaare yahaan khub garmee rahee to ghar me hee chhuttiyaa manaa lee :)
ReplyDelete'athaato ghumakkadee...' aur 'ek boond sahasaa...' jaisee pustaken to maanon paryatan paathyakram kee aisee pustake hain, jinase paryatan kee digree naheen milegee, ghoomanaa chaahe seekh len, fir yah apanee pasnd hai ki kisake paryatan kaa uddeshy ghumakkadee hai aur kise pareekshaa men nnbar haasil kar digree lenee hai.paryatan men naapaas, mainne paryatan n seekh paane kee daastaan bayaan karane kee koshish apanee pichhalee post 'filmee patanaa' men kee hai.
ReplyDeletehamaare lie jab kabhee roj kaa ruteen se hatakar apane kaama/chintaa/smasyaaen ko bhoolakar kuchh alag hee karate hain to ham paryatak ban jaate hain.
ReplyDeletekabhee kabhee to isake lie ghar se baahar nikalanaa hee naheen padataa.
aajakal ham antarajaal-paryatan khoob karate hain.
aimless browsing karate karate kabhee kabhee ham kuchh aisee jagah par pahnch jaate hain jahaan se nikalanaa mushkil ho jaataa hai.
nainee taal kabhee naheen gayaa. bahut sunaa hoon is jagah ke baare men.
aashaa hai ek din asalee paryatak banakar vahaan jaane kaa avasar milegaa.
shubhakaamanaaen
bhaaee ..aapakaa lekh padhane se pahale main bhee yahee sochataa thaa ...prakriti ke saundary kaa aannd letaa thaa ....mere lie bhee ab paryatan ke maane badal gae hai ....kabhee mere blog par bhee padhaare bade bhaaee
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