hamen najar aataa hai aaloo-tamaatar-moongafalee. jab paryaapt antashantaatmak ho jaataa hai to ek aadh viktor frenkal yaa peetar drakar thel dete rahe hain. jisase teen men bhee ginatee rahe aur terah men bhee. lihaajaa paathak apane toz par (on their toes) rahate hain – kanfyoojanaatmak mod men ki yah afasar lanth hai yaa intelekchual?! furasatiyaa vaadee aur lukkee lesate hain ki yah manaee badaa ghaagh taaip hai. jab kuchh naarmal-naarmal saa hone lagataa hai tab jonaathan livingstan bakaree aa jaatee hai yaa vishuddh bhootakaal kee cheej sonis. nishchay hee kaee paathak bhinnaa jaate hain. benaamee kament manaa kar rakhaa hai; so ek dann se blogar aaee-dee banaa kar hamen aasthaa chainal chalaane ko prerit karate hain – sab mithyaa hai. yah bloging to supar mithyaa hai. vaise bhee pandit jnyaanadatt tumhaaree tyoob khaalee ho gayee hai. blog karo band. ghar jaao. kuchh kaam kaa kaam karo. ful-stop.
ham to thelamathel blogar hain mitra; par bade dhyaan se dekh rahe hain; ek cheej jo hindee blogajagat men satat bik rahee hai. vah hai subuk subukavaadee saahitt (saahity). gareebee ke senteement par thelo. agalee laain men bhale maarlabaro 
sulagaa lo. apanee abhijaatyataa barakaraar rakhate huye uchch-madhyavarg kee uchchataa kaa kaijual jikr karo aur chaardonee yaa bargandee
– kyaa peete ho; thasak se bataa do. par kaam karane vaalee baaee ke kainsar se peedit pati kaa vistrit vivaran de kar padhane vaale ke aansoo 
aur tippaniyaan
jaroor jhadavaalo! karunaa kee gngaa-yamunaa-sarasvatee bah rahee hain, par ye gareeb hain jo abhaavagrast aur abhishapt hee bane rahanaa chaahate hain. unakee marjee! jyaadaa dimaag par jor n dene kaa man ho to gulashan nandaa aur kushavaahaa kaant kee aatmaa kaa aavaahan kar lo! “jheel ke us paar” chhaap lekhan to bahut hee “maaee diyar” poston kee veraaitee men aataa hai. masaalaa thelo! satat thelo. aur ye gaarantee hai ki is tarah kee tyoob kabhee khaalee n hogee. har peedhee kaa har bandaa/bandee umr ke ek padaav par jheel ke us paar jaanaa chaahataa hai. kaun pnhuchaayegaa?!
man ho rahaa hai ki “bheegee palaken” naam se ek naee aaee.dee. se nayaa blog banaa loon. aur “devadaas” pen nem se naye staail se thelanaa praarambh karoon. vaise is man kee paramaanensee par jyaadaa yakeen n karen. main bhee naheen karataa!
| aalok puraanik jee ne meree umr jabaree tirapan se badhaa kar aththaavan kar dee hai. kaheen sarakaaree rikaard men her fer n karavaa rahe hon! bade rasookh vaale aadamee hain. par kisee mahilaa kee is tarah umr badhaa kar dekhen!  ----- |
kyaa sar, raat bhar jaagane ke baad jab sone jaa rahaa hoon to neend hee bhaag khadee huyee hai aapakee post ko dikod karate hue.
ReplyDeletethahaakaa lagaane kaa man kar rahaa hai, par dar rahaa hoon ki din men padosee, meree or dekhate hue, apanee tarjanee, apane hee sir ke paas le jaakar klokavaais ghumaanaa n shuroo kar den:-)
aapake is blog par pahalee baar aayaa hoon- badee maanasik halachal ho gayee .thodaa vakt bitaa loongaa to shaayad dheerataa aae .
ReplyDeletesaty vachan mahaaraaj,
ReplyDeletethodaa kuchh bhool gaye aapa;
snskriti kee duhaaee, mahaanagaron kee snskriti, meraa bachapan kaa gaanv aur is nirdayee shahar kee jindagee, yuvaaon ke bhatakate kadam, aadi taaeetal blaag hit karane kee gaarantee hai .
liv in rileshan par adhikaar lekin binaa anubhav ke likhane vaale bhee thode hit paa gaye lekin usase bhee log ab bor ho gaye hain :-)
bhale hee ise koee hamaaree nigetiv maanasikataa kah le lekin blaaging ke Gaussian Distribution kee peek abhee bhee soch rahee hai ki keval blaag likhane se ganbheer vimarsh hogaa athavaa ek kraanti aayegee . asal men agar koee kraanti aayee bhee to vo Gaussian distribution kee tel se aayegee .
mujhe blaag padhane se naye vichaar milate hain lekin kraanti kee snbhaavanaa kam hai . 3-4 baar jab kuchh muddon ne man kee shaanti hilaayee to post banaayee, usake baad chhaapane se pahale padhaa to lagaa ki isamen aisaa kuchh bhee naheen likhaa hai jise hindee blaag padhane vaale n jaanate hon, aapakee bhaashaa men bhakk se riyalaaeejeshan huaa to post draaft men hee rakhee rahane dee .
aapake blaag kaa bhee charchaa tabhee tak hai jab aap in vividhataa vaalee 3-4 pairaagraaf vaalee post likhen . yahee aapake blaag kee USP (Unique selling proposition) hai . jaraa likh kar dekhiye snskriti vimarsh vaalee post, stait kaauntar amerikaa kaa staak maarket jaisaa dikh sakataa hai :-)
subuk subuk vaalee post padhanaa aur tipiyaanaa ek tarah kaa giltee plejar hai . usake baare men fir kabhee, vaise bhee josh josh men jyaadaa likh gaye hain, bhool chook lenee denee :-)
kanfyoojanaatmak mod kee bhalee kahee. apanaa to haal aksar hee aisaa rahataa hai.
ReplyDeletejab paryaapt antashantatmak ho jaataa hai to ek aadh viktor frenkal yaa peetar drakar thel dete rahe hain.
ReplyDeleteham bhee aapake pad chihnon par chal rahe hain ! antshantaatmak lekhan men badaa dam lagataa hai ! kyonki kaapee pest karane ke lie maitar nahee milataa !
"vah hai subuk subukavaadee saahitt (saahity). gareebee ke senteement par thelo.
is par kaapee pest maitar khoob hai isalie suvidhaa hai aur daad bhee achchhee batoree jaa sakane ke chaans hai !
aalok puraanik jee ne meree umr jabaree tirapan se badhaa kar aththaavan kar dee hai. kaheen sarakaaree rikaard men her fer n karavaa rahe hon! bade rasookh vaale aadamee hain !
ye bataanaa jaruree thaa kyaa ? khaamakhaa aap khud javaan ho gae aur hamako buddhaa kah diyaa ! aapakee budhdhauu kahane kee ichchhaa thee to yoon hee kah lete ! ham kyaa manaa kar rahe the aapako ? :)
subak subak se mujhe bhee chidh hai par kyaa karun mukhy dhaaraa to yahee hai aur bhaavanaatmak shoshan ko log udyat hai aur yahaan maasoom log shoshit hone ko bhee taiyaar -yah hamaaree duniyaa nahee hai jnyaan jee .aap apane mahal men mahafooj hain hamaare sareekhe kadradaan to aate hee rahenge -bhale hee aavaabhagat men aap chook bhee jaany !
ReplyDeleteyah achchhaa shagal hai. aap to mauj le len aur padhne vaale kanfyoojiyaayen. vaise kabhee kabhee is kaa aannnd lete rahanaa chaahie.
ReplyDelete'vah hai subuk subukavaadee saahitt (saahity). gareebee ke senteement par thelo. agalee laain men bhale -------'
ReplyDeleteSir, aap ka sense of humour bhi jabardast hai.
theek hai ,isakaa bhee ek daur hai aur chalegaa bhee . aur taaoo jee ne sahee faramaayaa hai ki - . antshantaatmak lekhan men badaa dam lagataa hai ! kyonki kaapee pest karane ke lie maitar nahee milataa !
ReplyDeletebheegee palaken taaeetil sahee lag rahaa hai, khol hee leejiye
ReplyDeleteant shnt hee sabase badaa saty hai.
ReplyDeletekyoki saty saare ant shnt ho liye hain.
anoopajee kee baat ko dil pe naa liyaa keejiye. unhe seeriyasalee naa liyaa keejiye, vo khud bhee apane aap ko seeriyasalee naheen lete.
aap tirapan ke hain, ye jaanakar bahut khush huee.
ham to aapake jnyaan kee umr ke hisaab se
aapako do sau saalon kaa maanane ko taiyaar hain.
vah hai subuk subukavaadee saahitt (saahity). gareebee ke senteement par thelo.
ReplyDelete"read your artical many times.... kitna sach or bindaas likhtyn hain aap... so true... amezing.."
Regards
haan to paande jee, kyaa kahaa? sinpal lainguej men traansalet kar dete to theek bhee rahataa. pataa naheen log baag kyaa kyaa "bak " dete hain. sabako apane jaisaa hee samajhate hain.
ReplyDeleteaap svayam kaunasee shrenee ke paathak hai sar jee??? ye baat to gol kar gaye aap..
ReplyDeletesubuk subukavaadee yaa antashantaatmak ???
vaise hindee blog jagat men blog ko nahee blogar ko padhaa jaataa hai.. fir usakee post chaahe kisee bhee vishay men ho.. aap svayn dekh leejie vivek bhaaee ne kahaa kee unhe aapakee post samajh nahee aatee aur dekhie fir bhee teepiyaa rahe hai.. matalab kee vo aapako padh rahe hai.. naa kee aapake blog ko..
baat to samajh lee, magar aaj aapakee bhaashaa par puraanikajee kaa asar jhalak rahaa hai, kyaa maajaraa hai? :)
ReplyDeletebaaki ab pratidin aapakee post padhane kee lat pad gaee hai.
andabadaatmak bhee chalegaa.
ReplyDeleteaap par bhee ajdakee upamaaon kee lapet men aa gae lagataa hai...
"aalok puraanik jee ne meree umr jabaree tirapan se badhaa kar aththaavan kar dee hai. kaheen sarakaaree rikaard men her fer n karavaa rahe hon!"
ReplyDeletemeraa anurodh hai ki ise aalok kee antashntaatmak kaarye ke roop men liyaa jaaye. vaise ek khabar de doon ki ab aapakee umar 58 hee maanee jaa rahee hai. ab kyaa hogaa ??
tirapan aur atthaavan men paanch saal kaa farak hotaa hai ab ise lokatntr se jod leejiye yaa paanch saalaa plaaning se par aapako agalee post ke lie masaalaa de rahe hain ham
ReplyDeletejab itanaa agadm-bagadm ho gayaa to ek aur sahee.
aur haan kredits men hamaaraa naam nihsnkoch daal deejiyegaa poochhane kee takalluf men rah mat jaane deejiyegaa
kya khoob likhe hain.. man ki baat kah diye hain.. sabse jyada hansi to tab aati hai jab apni likhi huyi subuk-subuk post ko ham khud hi nahi samajh paate aur log vah vah kah chale jaate hain.. :)
ReplyDeletepahalee baat paandey jee kee taareef men joki main pahale bhee kah chukaa hoon ye meree koee tippanee rokate naheen aur sabako pablik ke supurd kar dete hain fir chaahe inakee khinchaaee hee kyon n ho .iseelie to kushabhaaee main bhee sahamat hoon ki mai jnyaanadatt naam padhataa hoon yahaan hone vaalee bahas kee raunak kaa majaa letaa hoon n ki maanasik halachal ko joki meree samajh men kam aataa hai . dekh rahaa hoon ki tel lagaane vaalon kee snkhyaa jyaadaa hai fir bhee kahoongaa ki beshak sting aopareshan karaa ke dekh lo . inakee rachanaa ko nae blog par daal do . do dhele men naheen bikegee . aaj jnyaanadatt naam bik rahaa hai . yahee baat main bhaabhee jee se kah rahaa thaa . vaise aalok puraanik kaa badalaa mujhase kyon liyaa gayaa . mainen to aajatak sabako yahee bataayaa ki main jaat hoon fir kaise mujhe thaakur likh diyaa . yaa link galat lag gayaa :)
ReplyDeletevivek ne kahaa:
ReplyDelete"dekh rahaa hoon ki tel lagaane vaalon kee snkhyaa jyaadaa hai fir bhee kahoongaa ki beshak sting aopareshan karaa ke dekh lo . inakee rachanaa ko nae blog par daal do . do dhele men naheen bikegee."
meraa maananaa hai ki;
'do dhele' to aaj kee post men mil gae....:-)
aaj aapakaa vishay hai ant shnt banaam subukavaadee posten
ReplyDeletesnyog se aaj shaastreejee kaa vishay hai "sheershak aur paathakon kee snkhyaa men snbndh!"
unake blog par mainne nimnalikhit tippanee kee hai jo aapake chitthe par bhee laagoo hote hain
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ham n sheershak dekhate hain n saamagree.
ham ne kuchh logon ko chun liyaa.
unake blog padhataa hoon aur kabhee kabhee tippanee kar letaa hoon.
main jaanataa hoon ki mere chune hue chitthaakaar sarvashreshth naheen hain.
har samay achchhaa naheen likh paate.
fir bhee unako padhane nikalataa hoon.
filmen dekhane ke lie bhee yahee neeti apanaataa hoon.
mere kuchh chune hue nirdeshaka/abhinetaa/abhinetree hain.
keval unakee filmen dekhataa hoon.
main jaanataa hoon ki mere chune hue sitaare sarvashreshth naheen hain aur mujhe isakee parvaah naheen hai.
unakee filmen kabhee achchhee lagatee hain, aur kabhee naheen.
teevee ke lie bhee yahee neeti hai meree.
likhate rahie, aapakaa naam mainne chun liyaa.
shubhakaamaanaaen
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jnyaanajee, likhate rahie, chaahe ant shnt chaahe subuk vaadee yaa kisee gnbheer vishay par, hamen parvaah naheen.
aapakaa naam bhee mainne chun liyaa hai.
kyaa kahanaa thaa vivek sinh kee tipannee dekh kar bhool gayaa... mujhe meree maadarn aart vaalee baat yaad aa gaee !
ReplyDeletehamm, to devadaas ke chhadmanaam se kab likhanaa aarnbh kar rahe hain? ;)
ReplyDeletenaye blogon ke liye hamaaree shubhakaamanaa haiau r subuk subukavaadee drashy deekhalaa kar hee "satyajeet re"
ReplyDelete'paather paanchaalee "banaakar
sheersh film nirmaataa kahalaaye hain -
aur paanchaalee kaa nav avataar "mahaabhaarat " men bhee khoob chalaa ...
aap, khaanmakhaan
pareshaan ho rahe hain ..
abhee bahut kuchh hai
jise aap
hindee saahity ko
chhuq chhuq gaadee se dengen
- laavanyaa
saaraa kuchh baanch ke hamaaree aankhe bheeg rahee hain. blaag kaa naam saarthak rakhaa hai shuroo kar hee den. aur jo hamane aapako ghaagh blaagar kahaa hai vah aapane khud sveekaar kiyaa. hamane galat bhee naheen kahaa thaa. sach sveekaar kar aapane aapanee mahaanataa kaa parichay diyaa.
ReplyDeletejyaadaa dimaag par jor n dene kaa man ho to gulashan nandaa aur kushavaahaa kaant kee aatmaa kaa aavaahan kar lo! ....
ReplyDeletegyaan jee ab dimaag kee kyaa jarurat bas ham ne to post padhee or tipannee fenk dee... bahut sundar, kyaabaat hai; achchhee lagee...:)
dhanyavaad
bahut khoob likhaa hai bhaiiya lekin ham kis shreni ke hain ye to bataayaa hee naheen....?:))
ReplyDeleteneeraj
gurujee buraa naa maane to devadaas kee jagah mastaraam naam jyaadaa soot karegaa aur hit bhee hogaa.vaisaa aap guroojee hai,hame devadaas bhee chalegaa. ab vivek jee chaahe to tel lagaane vaalo kee snkhyaa me ijaafaa maan len.
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ReplyDeletepooraa naam rakhiye jee:
ReplyDelete’bheegee palaken, muskaraate lab ’
tab baat ban paayegee devadaas in bloging mod kee.
:)
'bhus men aag lagaakar banno door khadee' kahaavat kaa udaaharan paane ke lie skoolee bachchon ko aapakee yah post padhavaaenge .
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