kapade kaa ghodaa. laal choonar kee kalagee. kaalaa rng. bhoosaa, lugadee yaa kapade kaa bharaa huaa. melaa se le kar aayaa hogaa koee bachchaa. kaafee samay tak usakaa manornjan kiyaa hogaa ghode ne. antat: badarng hotaa huaa jagah jagah se fataa hogaa. bachche kaa usake prati aakarshan samaapt ho gayaa hogaa. ghar men kone par kaafee samay padaa rahaa hogaa. log koee bhee vastu yoon hee tyaag naheen karate. vastuyen aadat kee tarah hotee hain. mushkil se chhootatee hain. par antat: vah ghar ke baahar fenkaa gayaa hogaa.
mujhe shaam ko shivakutee mandir ke paas chahal kadamee karate deekhaa. fon par shree anoop shukl se baat ho rahee thee - ve kah rahe the ki hamane likhanaa kyon band kar diyaa hai. ham daftar men badhe kaam kaa havaalaa de rahe the. unakaa kahanaa thaa ki blog par jab hamane shree sameer laal jee se mulaakaat kee charchaa kee to jaroor relave vaalon ko lagaa hogaa ki yah vyakti vajanee cheejon ko tekal kar sakataa hai. lihaajaa savaaree se maal yaataayaat kaa kaam thamaa diyaa gayaa! ham safaaee de rahe the ki isamen shree sameer laal jee kaa koee yogadaan naheen hai. hamaaraa bhaagy hee aisaa hai. khaira; baat lambee chalee. ghar par hotaa to ek aadh fon kol se vyavadhaan aa gayaa hotaa. par sadak par ghoomate huye baat chalatee rahee.
baat gngaa kinaare tak ghoom aane par chalee. vaapasee men tiraahe kee sodiyam vepar lemp kee roshanee men fir dikhaa vah ghodaa. tiraahe par beech men aagaamee holikaa dahan ke liye logon ne lakadiyaan ikaththee kar rakhee theen. unheen ke beech men rakhaa thaa vah ghodaa. abhee usake dahan men das din kaa samay aur hai. holee ke liye ikaththaa kee gayee lakadiyon/saamagree ko koee uthaataa naheen hai. at: sambhaavanaa naheen hai ki ghodaa vahaan se kaheen jaaye.
bhalaa ho ghode kaa - usake foto ne ek chhotee see post kee soch mujhe de dee. kaale-badarng-fate ghode ne meree kalpanaa ko maalagaadiyon kee fikr se kuchh baahar nikaalaa. anoop shukl jee ke kahane kaa asar yah huaa ki yah likh kar pablish batan dabaa rahaa hoon. aap to kam roshanee men liyaa usakaa foto dekhen. yah anoop shukl jee se baatacheet ke paune do ghante baad post kar rahaa hoon.
anoop shukl jee kaa dhanyavaad karanaa hogaa, vo isee prakaar har dheele padate blogar ko protsaahit karate hue preranaa ke srot bane hue hain. unheen ke hadakaane par hamane bhee aaj ek post yoon hee thel dee hai…:)
ReplyDeleteapan to shukul jee ko thainkoo bolataa hai, jinake kaaran aap likhate dikhe to :-"
ReplyDeletesahee me khaalee-khaalee lagataa hai. aapako roj bhale hee do shabd par likhanaa chaahiye.
ReplyDeleteshaanadaar post hai. aap aise hee likhate rahen. aapako shaayad pataa naheen hai ki aalok puraanik aapake khilaaf yaachikaa daayar karane jaa rahe the ki aapake blaag n likhane se unakee pratibhaa kaa vikaas ruk gayaa jo aapake blaag par tippanee karane se hotaa thaa. sameeralaal vaalee baat ,aap jitanaa bhee manaa karen, sach hai. jab se relave vaalon ne dekhaa ki aap savaariyon kee jagah sameeralaalajee jaise 'deleeketa' saamaan ko bhee relave se dho sakate hain tabase unhonne aapake liye ye sevaa tay kar dee. :)
ReplyDeleteaap kal dekhiegaa. aap ko vah ghodaa shartiyaa naheen milegaa. ab tak kisee-n-kisee netaa ne use dekh hee liyaa hogaa. aur aap holee kee baat karate hain, jee oo to holikaa tak ko uthaa le jaanaa chaahate hai.
ReplyDeletelugadee hue n bhoos ke bematalab ghode kee antim vidaaee kee tasveer to bahut saaf naheen hai.. lekin aapakee bhaavanaaon ke udaasee kee hai.. bahut achchhaa!
ReplyDeleteachchhaa lagaa . sookshm cheejon par aapakee najr kaa ek aur saakshy . are bhaee itane bhee bijee mat rahie ki ham aapako mis karate hue ilaahaabaad aa dhamaken . hafte men do teen din to aaeeye maanasik halachal men
ReplyDeleteshree sameer laal jee se mulaakaat kee charchaa kee to jaroor relave vaalon ko lagaa hogaa ki yah vyakti vajanee cheejon ko tekal kar sakataa hai.
ReplyDelete---haa haa!!!! kyaa nishkarsh nikaalaa hai..anoop bhaaee kee soch bemisaal...vaah vaaha///
sach men aapakee anupasthiti akhar rahee thee, aaj subah subah ek takkar fir maaraa ki shaayad aap dikh jaayen, chalo kuchh milaa to !
ReplyDeleteho n ho, sameer jee ne aapako kuchh mntr to avashy hee diyaa hogaa, unake anajaane hee aapane ugalavaa bhee liyaa hogaa .
vah sab ham jajamaanan ke bhee sunabe kee ichachhaa hai, ek shrrinkhalaa usee par chalaa den to badaa puny hogaa .
abhivaadan !
lekhan men yogadaan do tarah se kiyaa jaataa hai.
ReplyDeleteek to likhakar, jaise main kar rahaa hoon. haalaanki log kahate hain ki tum n likhakar jo yogadaan karo, vah jyaadaa saarthak hogaa.
par main naheen maanoongaa.
doosare tareekaa kaa yogadaan hotaa hai naa likhakar, jo aap is samay kar rahe hain, ye aapako naheen karanaa chaahie. yaanee aap likhakar hee yogadaan den.
anoopajee sahee kah rahe hain aapake khilaaf yaachikaa bhee daayar ho sakatee hai.
roj likhanaa snbhav n ho, to fotoo hee roj chapek den. rel men to pooree duniyaa hotee hai. fotoo hee fotoo mil to len, taaip.
bloging se dooree aap kaise baradaasht kar paate hain. ham se to aap ke blog kee dooree hee baradaasht naheen hotee. mujhe bhee beech men bhopaal bhee jaanaa padaa vahaan bhee aap kaa blog dhoondhataa rahaa. yah sahee hai ki aap do shabd bhale hee ve "aaj chhuttee" hee kyon n hon likhate rahen. aap ke blog kee gairahaajaree bahut khalatee hai.
ReplyDeletekal bhee aap kaa blog najar aayaa to blogar ne use kholane se manaa kar diyaa. aaj subah kholaa to padhnaa shuru karate hee bijalee gul ho gaee. aaee to muvakkilon se ulajhaa rahaa. ab jaa kar padh paayaa hoon.
vyastataa hee to jeevan hai. vah rahanaa chaahie. lekin do shabd vaalee post se kaam chal jaaegaa.
aap kavitaa likhane kee baat kar rahe the. vah jaapanee haaikoo, meenaakshee jee vaalaa tripadam achchhee foramet hai, seekhane men bhee aasaan hai. aap shaam ko ghoomate ghoomate bhee abhyaas kar sakate hain aur aakar seedhe post taiyaar kar sakate hain. ek haaikoo se kaam chal jaaegaa.
kar ke jarur dekhen.
chalie is bahaane aapakee post to aaee.
ReplyDeletevarnaa subah to ab ham knpyootar kholate hee naheen kyonki aap kuchh likhate hee naheen....
bhaaee aap to lagaataar likhen....naheen to furasat se likhanevaale logon ko taanaa maarane kaa maukaa mil hee jaaegaa....
ReplyDeletejnyaan bhaaee saahab , aapakee post dekhakar khushee huee ..vahaan ke tyauhaar tathaa samaaj kee baareekiyaan aap ke likhe se ham ittee door bhee jaan paate hain usakaa dhanyavaad -- likhiyegaa --
ReplyDeletebloging se dooree aap kaise baradaasht kar paate hain. ham se to aap ke blog kee dooree hee baradaasht naheen hotee. mujhe bhee beech men bhopaal bhee jaanaa padaa vahaan bhee aap kaa blog dhoondhataa rahaa. yah sahee hai ki aap do shabd bhale hee ve "aaj chhuttee" hee kyon n hon likhate rahen. aap ke blog kee gairahaajaree bahut khalatee hai.
ReplyDeletekal bhee aap kaa blog najar aayaa to blogar ne use kholane se manaa kar diyaa. aaj subah kholaa to padhnaa shuru karate hee bijalee gul ho gaee. aaee to muvakkilon se ulajhaa rahaa. ab jaa kar padh paayaa hoon.
vyastataa hee to jeevan hai. vah rahanaa chaahie. lekin do shabd vaalee post se kaam chal jaaegaa.
aap kavitaa likhane kee baat kar rahe the. vah jaapanee haaikoo, meenaakshee jee vaalaa tripadam achchhee foramet hai, seekhane men bhee aasaan hai. aap shaam ko ghoomate ghoomate bhee abhyaas kar sakate hain aur aakar seedhe post taiyaar kar sakate hain. ek haaikoo se kaam chal jaaegaa.
kar ke jarur dekhen.
lekhan men yogadaan do tarah se kiyaa jaataa hai.
ReplyDeleteek to likhakar, jaise main kar rahaa hoon. haalaanki log kahate hain ki tum n likhakar jo yogadaan karo, vah jyaadaa saarthak hogaa.
par main naheen maanoongaa.
doosare tareekaa kaa yogadaan hotaa hai naa likhakar, jo aap is samay kar rahe hain, ye aapako naheen karanaa chaahie. yaanee aap likhakar hee yogadaan den.
anoopajee sahee kah rahe hain aapake khilaaf yaachikaa bhee daayar ho sakatee hai.
roj likhanaa snbhav n ho, to fotoo hee roj chapek den. rel men to pooree duniyaa hotee hai. fotoo hee fotoo mil to len, taaip.
sach men aapakee anupasthiti akhar rahee thee, aaj subah subah ek takkar fir maaraa ki shaayad aap dikh jaayen, chalo kuchh milaa to !
ReplyDeleteho n ho, sameer jee ne aapako kuchh mntr to avashy hee diyaa hogaa, unake anajaane hee aapane ugalavaa bhee liyaa hogaa .
vah sab ham jajamaanan ke bhee sunabe kee ichachhaa hai, ek shrrinkhalaa usee par chalaa den to badaa puny hogaa .
abhivaadan !
shaanadaar post hai. aap aise hee likhate rahen. aapako shaayad pataa naheen hai ki aalok puraanik aapake khilaaf yaachikaa daayar karane jaa rahe the ki aapake blaag n likhane se unakee pratibhaa kaa vikaas ruk gayaa jo aapake blaag par tippanee karane se hotaa thaa. sameeralaal vaalee baat ,aap jitanaa bhee manaa karen, sach hai. jab se relave vaalon ne dekhaa ki aap savaariyon kee jagah sameeralaalajee jaise 'deleeket' saamaan ko bhee relave se dho sakate hain tabase unhonne aapake liye ye sevaa tay kar dee. :)
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