gavaaksh – aprail 2012

janavaree 2008 “gavaaksh” blog ke maadhyam se ham hindee blog-premiyon ko videshon men rah rahe hindee/pnjaabee ke un lekhakon/kaviyon kee samakaaleen rachanaaon se roo-b-roo karavaane kaa prayaas karate aa rahe hain jo apane vatan hindustaan se koson door rahakar apane samay aur samaaj ke yathaarth ko apanee rachanaaon men rekhaankit kar rahe hain. “gavaaksh” men ab tak vishaal (italee), divyaa maathur (lndan), anil janavijay (maasko), devee naagaraanee(yoo.es.e.), tejendr sharmaa(lndan), rachanaa shreevaastav(lndan), poornimaa varman(dubaee), ilaa prasaad(yoo es e), bhagat dhavan (denamaark), chaand shuklaa (denamaark), ved prakaash ‘vatuk’(yoo es e), rekhaa maitr (yoo es e), tanadeep tamannaa (kanaadaa), praan sharmaa (yoo ke), sukhindar (kanaadaa), surajeet(kanaadaa), do sudhaa dheengaraa(amerikaa), minnee grevaal(kanaadaa), balavindar chahal (nyoojeelaind), balabeer kaur snghedaa(kanaadaa), shail agravaal (inglaind), shraddhaa jain (singaapur), daa. sukhapaal(kanaadaa), prem maan(yoo.es.e.), (sv.) ikabaal arpan, sushree meenaa chopadaa (kanaadaa), daa. haradeep kaur sndhu(aastreliyaa), daa. bhaavanaa kunar(aastreliyaa), anupamaa paathak (sveedan), shivacharan jaggee kussaa(lndan), jasabeer maahal(kanaadaa), mnju mishraa (amerikaa), sukhindar (kanaadaa), devindar kaur (yoo ke), neeroo aseem(kainedaa) aur ilaa prasaad aadi kee rachanaaen aur pnjaabee kathaakaar-upanyaasakaar harajeet atavaal ke upanyaas “savaaree” ke hindee anuvaad kee paintaaleesaveen kist aapane padheen. “gavaaksh” ke aprail 2012 ank men prastut hain – vaane, amerikaa men rah raheen hindee ek pramukh kavayitree daa. anil prabhaa kumaar kee teen kavitaaen tathaa harajeet atavaal ke dhaaraavaahik pnjaabee upanyaas “savaaree” kee ikyaavanaveen kist kaa hindee anuvaad…

vaane, amerikaa se
daa. anil prabhaa kumaar kee teen kavitaaen

1. bhoot
daadee kahatee thee
kunaaree ladakiyaan
baalon me fool naheen lagaateen
snvar kar shaam ko
pedon ke paas se naheen guzarateen
chust, badan ughaade
kapade naheen pahanateen.
kyon,
maine prativaad kiyaa thaa.
bhoot peechhe pad jaate hain,
usakaa bas yahee javaab thaa.
mujhase sadee- galee baaten
mat karo
maine paanv patak kar kahaa thaa.

ab akhabaaron men
unheen bhooton kee
khabaren bharee hain
jinakaa ughade yaa
ghoonghat men dhake
tan se koee matalab naheen
jinake shikaar kaa naam
bas aurat honaa chaahie.
vah shahar kee ho yaa gaanv kee,
vidushee yaa anapadh,
bachchee yaa boodhee,
kisee bhee jaati yaa desh kee
ho yuddh yaa shaanti,
ghar yaa baahar,
bas ho aurat.

ab to har jagah,
bhoot hee bhoot hain.
shaayad hamen hee ojhaa bananaa hogaa
mahaakaalee ban
svayn hee
mahishaasur ko
badhanaa hogaa
kyonki rakshaa ko
ab
koee shiv naheen aaenge.

2. tuchchhataa
kitanaa aasaan thaa
mujhe chhotaa karanaa
bas mere paas khade
aadamee kaa
qad badhaa diyaa.

3. ashtabhujaa
vah ashtabhujaa hai
ek se snbhaalatee hai
daftar kee kamaan
doosare se gॄhasthee kee
raasen thaamatee hai
pati ke kndhe se kndhaa milaa
arth- bhaar baantatee hai vah
bachchon kee baanh thaam
unhen zindagee men
chadhanaa, sambhalanaa
sikhaatee hai vah
girane par sahaaraa de
uthaatee hai vah
rishton kee zimmedaariyaan
usake palle hain
samaaj ke bhee kuchh
farz hain usake
sab kuchh detee- baantatee
vah ashtabhujaa ban gaee hai
usakaa saaraa astitv ab
bas bhujaa hee bhujaa hai
in bhujaaon ke chakr men
kho gae
apane shesh bhaag ko
ab dhoondhtee hai vah.
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do anil prabhaa kumaar
janm: dillee men.
shikshaa: "hindee ke saamaajik naatakon men yugabodh" vishay par shodh.
lekhan: 'jnyaanodaya' ke 'naee kalam visheshaank men 'khaalee daayare' kahaanee par pratham puraskaar
kuchh rachanaaen 'dharmayuga' 'aavesha', 'jnyaanodaya' aur 'snchetanaa' men bhee chhpeen.
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dhaaraavaahik pnjaabee upanyaas(kist- 46)

savaaree

harajeet atavaal
hindee anuvaad : subhaash neerav

॥ ikyaavan ॥
eestar tak to kaam bahut kam ho gayaa thaa. din men do teen hee dileevaree ke aardar aate. vah maje se yaard kee taraf jaataa. aonasaring masheen dekhataa ki kis kis ke maisej hain. vahaan baith kar vah kuchh der akhabaar padhataa. fir kuchh silendar pikaap par rakhataa aur fon ko gharavaale fon par daayavart karake aa jaataa. eestar se pahale ek badaa lod silendaron kaa mngavaa liyaa thaa. vah sochataa ki yadi kaarobaar aise hee rahaa to yah stok saaree garmiyaan khatm naheen hone vaalaa. use itanee tasallee thee ki is seezan men saalabhar kee tanakhvaah ban gaee. ab usane soshal sikyuritee lene band kar dee. koee museebat khadee kar sakataa thaa, muft men yoon hee paise klem karane. ab usako naukaree kee zaroorat naheen thee. yah bijanes usake lie theek thaa. is seezan men usako kaafee anubhav ho gayaa thaa. aage poore garamee ke din khaalee pade the. agale seezan ke lie pooree tarah taiyaar ho sakataa thaa.
eleesan se usakaa ab vaastaa naheen rahaa thaa, par usako apanaa fon nnbar de aayaa thaa ki yadi zaroorat pade to fon kar le. shaun ab nyoojeelaind se aastreliyaa aa gayaa thaa. usakaa fon aataa rahataa thaa. shaun kee baaton se lagataa thaa ki vah bahut khush naheen thaa, par vaapas bhee naheen aa sakataa thaa. jairee ston usako milataa rahataa thaa. jairee khush thaa ki baladev ne apanaa kaam theekathaak chalaa liyaa thaa. vah kahataa-
''agar teraa yaard kisee saral pahunch vaalee jagah par ho to teraa bijanes aur bhee theek chale.''
liz apane kamare men kam hee aatee. vah ghar kam hee aatee. yadi aatee to daumanik usake sng hotaa. usakaa daumanik ke saath hee bahut samay guzarataa thaa. raat men daumanik usake saath aa jaataa yaa liz usake flait men chalee jaatee. yadi kabhee liz akelee hotee aur usakaa mood hotaa to vah baladev ke saath aa letatee. baladev kabhee n rokataa. liz ab kisee stor men kaam karane lagee thee. stor se usakaa kaalej kareeb padataa thaa. baladev ko kiraayaa samay se de jaatee. usako kabhee bhee maanganaa naheen padataa thaa. baladev ko liz apane kaam kee shifton ke baare men jaanakaaree dene lagatee, par baladev ne kabhee is taraf dhyaan naheen diyaa thaa maano usamen ab usakee koee dilachaspee naheen rahee thee.
ek shaam daumanik ne ghntee bajaaee. liz ghar men naheen thee. baladev ne daravaazaa kholaa. daumanik 'hailo' kahataa huaa andar aa gayaa. liz ko n dekhakar bolaa-
''abhee lautee naheen ?... main fir kabhee aaoongaa, ab chalataa hoon.''
''agar usakaa intazaar karanaa hai to yahaan baithakar kar le, mujhe koee etaraaz naheen.''
''shukriyaa ! mujhe ummeed thee ki aaj usakee pahalee shift hogee.''
''kaheen fns gaee hogee, koee baaton vaalaa mil gayaa hogaa. kyaa piegaa ?''
daumanik kursee par baith chukaa thaa, bolaa-
''kuchh bhee chalegaa, par thndaa hee.''
''biyar piyegaa ?''
''naheen, kok vagairah.''
baladev do gilaason men kok daal laayaa. daumanik ne cheears kahate hue apanaa gilaas uthaa liyaa. baladev poochhane lagaa-
''liz bataa rahee thee ki too sheyar eksachenj men kaam karataa hai, theek hai ?''
''haan dev, das saal ho gae.''
''fir to miliyanz men khelataa hogaa.''
''par mere hisse to kuchh sau hee aate hain.''
kahakar daumanik hnsaa aur poochhane lagaa-
''too bhee sheyaron ke saath deel karataa hai ?''
''mujhe is bijanes kee kataee samajh naheen hai, meraa dost hai shaun, usako khoob achchhee jaanakaaree hai is baare men. usake kahane par ek baar mainne khareede the aur paise bach gae the. mainne to ve paise bachaa lie par shaun ne dubaaraa doosare sheyar khareed lie the aur ve saare gnvaa baithaa. jo sheyar usane khareede, unake bhaav gir gae the.''
''is bijanes men yah dar to banaa hee rahataa hai. bahut keyaraful hone kee zaroorat hotee hai. isamen jaldabaajee naheen karanee chaahie. vaise aajakal keematen giree huee hain. sheyar khareedane kaa badhiyaa maukaa hai.''
''ho sakataa hai, par mere paas itane paise naheen hai.''
''keematen to snpattiyon kee bhee badh rahee hain. log karzaa uthaakar bhee khareed lete hain, agar theek cheez theek bhaav men mil jaae.''
''daumanik, teree to yah laain hai. tujhe naheen lagataa ki ikanomee men yah boom nakalee hai yaa asthaayee hai.''
''yah too kaise kah sakataa hai ?''
''kyonki jaayadaad kee keemat nirdhaarit karane ke lie do pramukh tatv kaam karate hain. ek to ghar ko banaane kee keemat aur doosaraa jagah kee keemat. is mulk men n jagah kee keemat badhee hai aur n hee ghar banaane kee. fir yah gharon kee keematen kaise badh gaeen !''
''dev, main teree baat se sahamat naheen. par toone baat bahut pate kee kee hai. yah jo boom hai, pooree duniyaa men hai, akele britaaniyaa men hee naheen.''
''yah thechar-regan jodee aarthikataa ko nakalee teeke lagaa lagaa kar mazaboot dikhaae jaa rahee hai. main to darataa hoon ki kaheen keematen gir n paden.''
''vaise sheyar baazaar men bhee bade kraish kaa dar pal rahaa hai. aise kraish men se kaee log kamaa jaate hain jaise teesare dashak men kainedee parivaar ne kamaayaa thaa. jisake palle paise hon, giratee keematon par sheyar khareed le.''
''vahee chaans kee baaten hain, juaa hai.''
''haan, aisaa juaa jisako dhyaan se khelakar yakeenee banaayaa jaa sakataa hai.''
''agar jaayadaadon kee keematen gir padeen to is sarakaar ke lie buraa hogaa.''
''dev, agar risaishan aayaa to pooree duniyaa men aaegaa, shaayad n bhee aae.''
''ikonomist to bahut bhavishyavaaniyaan kar rahe hain''
''haan, inafleshan jo naheen badhee jo ki achchhee baat hai, par boom ke lie buree bhee. tanakhvaahen badhee naheen, jaayadaadon kee keematen badh gaeen.''
''daumanik, yadi isake baare men gaharaaee se sochen to saaf dikhane lag padataa hai ki yah sab nakalee hai.''
''dev, too gais ke bijanes men hai. isake sheyar bhee theek hote hain. paitrol se vaastaa jo hai isakaa... agar man bane to khareed lenaa.''
''dekhoongaa kisee padaav par jaakar yadi man banaa to. abhee to main is bijanes men bilkul nayaa hn, pahalaa hee seezan hai.''
daumanik ghadee dekhate hue bolaa-
''mujhe to baithe bahut taaim ho gayaa. liz abhee bhee naheen aaee. ab mujhe chalanaa chaahie.''
''daumanik, too to bahut badhiyaa aadamee hai, mujhe to aaj pataa chalaa. tere saath baaten karane men majaa aa rahaa hai.''
daumanik ne dibbaa kholaa aur theek se hokar baithate hue bolaa-
''lebar paartee ko saport karate ho ?''
''nahee, main kisee paartee ko saport naheen karataa. main vot hee naheen daalataa.''
''kyon ?''
''mujhe ye leedar leedar kam aur ektar jyaadaa lagate hain.''
''yah bhee theek hai par har paartee kee kuchh paalisiyaan hotee hain, jinase aapako sahamat-asahamat honaa hotaa hai.''
''daumanik, mainne gaur se dekhaa hai ki paalisiyon kaa bahut thodaa fark huaa karataa hai. ab mujhe to lebar paartee achchhee lagatee hai par ye toree kaa mukaabalaa karane laayak naheen.''
''iseelie dev, main es.dee.el.pee. kaa saportar hoon.''
''kisee ke bhee saportar ho jaao, aakhir deshon ko chalaate to kuchh adrishy haath hee hain.''
''teraa bhee yah yakeen hai.''
''bilkul. ye adrishy haath har desh men hote hain. yahaan bhee aur amerikaa men bhee hain. ab amerikaa ke prejeedent ke lie alikhit sharten hain ki vah ameer ho, goraa ho, aayarish pichhadee jaati kaa ho, jyuo kaa hamadard ho vagairah....''
''dev, ham kisee pab men chalen, fir jee bharakar baaten karenge. mujhe lagataa hai ki liz ke bahaane meree pahachaan ek achchhe dost se ho gaee hai.''
baladev muskaraayaa aur kahane lagaa-
''liz ko in baaton se elarjee hai.''
''usakaa kshetr doosaraa hai. vah zindagee ko halke-fulke andaaj men letee hai.''
''daumanik, teree liz se dostee kaise huee, usako to teree koee bhee baat pasand naheen aatee hogee. vah tujhe bhee bor karatee hogee.''
''dev, badee door kee soch rahe ho. meree usake saath dostee kaa ek aadhaar to yah hai ki vah aurat hai, khoobasoorat hai. doosaraa yah ki mujhe lagataa hai ki usake maadhyam se kuchh sheyar bech sakoongaa. meree kaarobaaree nazar mujhe kaee sandesh de rahee hai, tabhee....''
unake baat karate karate hee liz bhee aa gaee. unhen ek saath baithe dekhakar bolee-
''soree byoyaz, aaee em let.''
baladev daumanik se bolaa-
''agar tum chaaho to yahaan mere saath baithakar bhee shaam guzaar sakate ho. peezaa mngavaa lenge, mere paas har tarah kee drink hai hee.''
(jaaree…)

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gavaaksh – maarch 2012

janavaree 2008 “gavaaksh” blog ke maadhyam se ham hindee blog-premiyon ko videshon men rah rahe hindee/pnjaabee ke un lekhakon/kaviyon kee samakaaleen rachanaaon se roo-b-roo karavaane kaa prayaas karate aa rahe hain jo apane vatan hindustaan se koson door rahakar apane samay aur samaaj ke yathaarth ko apanee rachanaaon men rekhaankit kar rahe hain. “gavaaksh” men ab tak vishaal (italee), divyaa maathur (lndan), anil janavijay (maasko), devee naagaraanee(yoo.es.e.), tejendr sharmaa(lndan), rachanaa shreevaastav(lndan), poornimaa varman(dubaee), ilaa prasaad(yoo es e), bhagat dhavan (denamaark), chaand shuklaa (denamaark), ved prakaash ‘vatuk’(yoo es e), rekhaa maitr (yoo es e), tanadeep tamannaa (kanaadaa), praan sharmaa (yoo ke), sukhindar (kanaadaa), surajeet(kanaadaa), do sudhaa dheengaraa(amerikaa), minnee grevaal(kanaadaa), balavindar chahal (nyoojeelaind), balabeer kaur snghedaa(kanaadaa), shail agravaal (inglaind), shraddhaa jain (singaapur), daa. sukhapaal(kanaadaa), prem maan(yoo.es.e.), (sv.) ikabaal arpan, sushree meenaa chopadaa (kanaadaa), daa. haradeep kaur sndhu(aastreliyaa), daa. bhaavanaa kunar(aastreliyaa), anupamaa paathak (sveedan), shivacharan jaggee kussaa(lndan), jasabeer maahal(kanaadaa), mnju mishraa (amerikaa), sukhindar (kanaadaa), devindar kaur (yoo ke) aur neeroo aseem(kainedaa) aadi kee rachanaaen aur pnjaabee kathaakaar-upanyaasakaar harajeet atavaal ke upanyaas “savaaree” ke hindee anuvaad kee chauvaaleesaveen kist aapane padheen. “gavaaksh” ke maarch 12 ank men prastut hain samakaaleen hindee kavitaa kee ek pramukh kavayitree ilaa prasaad kee kuchh kavitaaen tathaa harajeet atavaal ke dhaaraavaahik pnjaabee upanyaas “savaaree” kee pachaasaveen kist kaa hindee anuvaad…

hyustan, amerikaa se
ilaa prasaad kee teen kavitaaen

kavitaa

aaj fir mainne tumhaaraa naam liyaa
aaj fir mainne kisee se tumhaaree baat kee

aaj fir mainne kisee ko pyaar se sahalaayaa
kisee ko apanee ujalee hnsee se nahalaayaa
koee mere qareeb aayaa
main kisee ke paas thee

yah kaisaa vakfaa thaa
jo mere aur kavitaa ke beech men aayaa
tumhaaraa mere qareeb honaa
ek kavitaa-see hee to baat thee….

ek dost ke lie

sneh yadi sambodhit hotaa hai sparshon se
sparshon kee yadi koee bhaashaa hotee hai
to shabdon ko anupasthit hee rahane do

anubhootiyon kee koee zameen hogee
ehasaason kaa koee makaan hogaa
in anakahe anubhavon ko
usee zameen par, usee makaan men basane do

smritiyon kee ek kitaab hogee
jo tumhaare bhee paas hogee
in komal neh pnkhudiyon ko
usee kitaab men jharane do
taaki bojhil palon men
jab bhee kitaab khule
sneh kaa suvaas
tumhaare aasapaas ghule !

asveekriti

main talahat-see nikaalakar
fenk dee gaee hoon
kinaaron par

laharon ko meraa
saath bahanaa
raas naheen aayaa

main n shnkh thee
n seepee
ki chun lee gaee hotee
kinheen utsuk nigaahon se

ret thee
ret–see raundee gaee
kaal ke kroor haathon se.
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dhaaraavaahik pnjaabee upanyaas(kist- 45)

savaaree

harajeet atavaal
hindee anuvaad : subhaash neerav

॥ pachaas ॥
kuchh dinon pashchaat satanaam ke dukaan kholane ke samay shindaa baahar khadaa thaa. usako dekhakar satanaam khush ho gayaa. shinde ke haath aur jubaan kaanp rahe the. vah satanaam ko dekhate hee kahane lagaa-
''maar diyaa yaar, tere bhaaee ke bolon ne. ye mujhe jeene naheen degaa. saalaa shareer kaa kasht jhelaa jaataa hai, par rooh ke zakhmon kee taab naheen jhelee jaatee.''
satanaam ne dukaan kholee. andar padee raat kee botal men se bachee huee vhiskee kaa ek paig shinde ko banaakar diyaa. vah khush ho gayaa aur kaam karane kee taiyaaree karane lagaa. satanaam ne kahaa-
''shinde, yah to tujhe lag gaee bhaee.''
''haan yaar, par main dheere-dheere chhod doongaa. zaraa man chahake to, koee khushee bhee mile kaheen.''
''too mere paas hee rah, khushee hee khushee hai. yahaan tujhe koee faalatoo lafz naheen bolane vaalaa.''
''vo laakh rupaye kaa raub daale jaataa hai.''
''yah bhee ho jaaegaa, main teraa sau pond usako de aayaa karoongaa, too jyaadaa chintaa n kar.''
kuchh der baad ajamer kaa fon aa gayaa. dukaan kholane tak shinde kee kamee naheen khatakee thee. usane usake kamare men dekhaa, shindaa vahaan naheen thaa, neeche dukaan men bhee naheen. vah samajh gayaa thaa ki satanaam kee taraf chalaa gayaa hogaa. usane satanaam ko us vakt shinde ko samajhaane ke lie kahaa thaa, jab paanee sir se oopar guzar chukaa thaa. use yah bhee dar thaa ki satanaam shinde ko samajhaane kee bajaay ukhaadane kaa yatn karegaa. vahee huaa. shindaa usake paas chalaa gayaa. ajamer man hee man kudhane lagaa thaa aur saaraa din kudhataa rahaa thaa.
dopahar ko satanaam kee vain dukaan ke saamane aakar khadee huee. use dekhate hee ajamer kaa cheharaa tan gayaa. sameep khadee gurindar ne usakaa kndhaa dabaayaa. satanaam bhee usakaa rukh samajh gayaa aur andar ghusate hue bolaa-
''bhaaee, mujhe to usakee bilakul zaroorat naheen. bhalaa, sharaabee bandaa kyaa kaam kar legaa. aur fir ab to meraa kaam chal hee rahaa hai. main to kahane aayaa hoon ki usako yaheen apane paas hee rakho.''
ajamer kuchh n bolaa. gurindar kahane lagee-
''achchhee baat to yah hogee ki usako vaapas bhej do, apane parivaar men jaae. yahaan inglaind men rahaa to koee ulaahane vaalee baat hee n ho jaae.''
''vaapas bhej den to meraa diyaa edavaans kaise pooraa hogaa. aur fir log kyaa kahenge !'' ajamer ne kahaa.
usake chehare kaa tanaav ab tak kuchh kam ho chukaa thaa. satanaam ne poochhaa-
''ab dubaaraa koee khaas baat ho gaee thee ?''
''pataa naheen ab kaun bhadakaataa hai. kahataa, mujhe khaalistaanee banaakar yahaan pakkaa karaao.''
''yah naee baat kahaan se nikaal laayaa, use pataa naheen hamaare parivaar kaa, taaye kaa.''
''pataa to usako sab hai. kahataa hai, saaree duniyaa yahaan pakkee ho rahee hai to main kyon naheen. mainne samajhaayaa ki teree leegal sichyueshan aur hai, tujhe teesaraa saal hai ilaleegal rahate hue, too ab aise hee samay nikaal, jo nikalataa hai.''
''fir kyaa bolaa ?''
''bolaa, tumane meraa jaanaboojh kar taaim nikalavaa diyaa. mainne kahaa ki ham kyaa tere dushman hain, isee baat par mujhe gussaa aa gayaa.''
''ye baaten isake dimaag men kaun daalataa hogaa ?''
''ye mullaa muneer aur vo baaman. par yah bhee kaun-saa bachchaa hai, duniyaa bhar kee khabar rakhataa hai. mujhe lagataa hai ki yah kaalee ko bhee paise khilaataa hai. tabhee vo isakaa peechhaa karatee yahaan tak pahunch gaee. too bhee isakaa dhyaan rakhanaa.'' ajamer ne kahaa.
satanaam juaais ke naam par chup rahaa. vah jaanataa thaa ki juaais aisee naheen thee.
satanaam vaapas apanee dukaan men aayaa to shinde ne kahaa-
''kar aayaa bhaaee se meeting ?''
''haan, par too kyon ghabaraa rahaa hai ?''
''kyaa faisalaa kiyaa meree kismat kaa ?... main to kahataa hoon, mujhe vaapas bhej do.''
''jaisee teree marjee. par main to kahoongaa ki jab tak samay lagataa hai, lagaa le, par ek kaam yah kar ki sharaab kam kar de. is tarah tere se kaam naheen hogaa.''
''jo bhee ho, main bhaajee ke paas naheen rahanaa chaahataa.''
''too mere paas rahataa rah.''
''mujhe pataa hai, manajeet bhaabhee kaa svabhaav akele rahane kaa hai. mujhe baladev ke paas bhej do. usakaa paanee bhee dekh len.''
''baladev bhee dileep kumaar kee tarah kaheen-kaheen hee dikhaaee detaa hai... too mere paas rah. manajeet kee chintaa chhod de. too usakee haan men haan milaaye chalanaa aur doosaraa yah ki baid kee jagah taayalet yooz karanaa.''
''too bhee yaar kamaal karataa hai....''
kahate hue shindaa sharamindaa-saa hone lagaa.
satanaam soch rahaa thaa ki yadi shindaa sharaab kam kar de to pahale kee tarah ek baar fir vah fursat-see paa sakataa thaa. usane shinde ko khush rakhanaa shuroo kar diyaa. maaiko sigareten peetaa thaa, shindaa usake saath khade hokar kabhee-kabhee kash lagaane lag padataa. usane vhiskee kam kar dee. shaam ke vakt hee peetaa. ab usase jyaadaa pee bhee naheen jaatee thee. vah sheeghr hee nashe men ho jaataa. satanaam sochataa ki zaroor dopahar ko juaais ke yahaan se pee aataa hogaa. juaais usako lagabhag har roz hee ghar le jaayaa karatee.
shinde kee sehat pahale kee apekshaa achchhee hone lagee thee. aankhon ke neeche kee thailiyaan theek ho rahee theen. satanaam sochane lagaa ki ajamer ne shinde ko barbaad karake chhod diyaa thaa. jaanavar se bhee pyaar se kaam liyaa jaataa hai, shindaa ko achchhaa-bhalaa aadamee thaa. usakee dekhabhaal zarooree thee. usako shinde kaa juaais ke ghar jaanaa achchhaa naheen lagataa thaa, par rokataa kabhee naheen, balki majaak karate hue kahataa-
''har aurat ek jaisee hotee hai. meraa vaastaa meenaa kumaaree se lekar shreedevee ke saath padaa hai.''
kaee baar is baat ko ulatakar bhee kah detaa-
''har aurat apanee jagah hai, harek kee apanee ekting, apanee adaa.''
satanaam ke lie pahale vaale din lautane lage the. shinde ne pun: saaraa kaam snbhaal liyaa thaa. ab to vah saaree dileevaree akelaa hee kar detaa. satanaam to kaee baar kamar par haath rakhe hee khadaa rahataa. smithafeeld meet maarket jaane ke lie shindaa tadake hee uth khadaa hotaa aur saaraa kaam daud daudakar karataa. satanaam usakaa sau paund har saptaah jaakar ajamer ko de aataa.
haaeebaree men ab gurindar hee jyaadaa samay dukaan par khadee hotee. shairan aur haravindar skool se lautate to usakee kuchh madad kar dete. paanch baje tonee aa jaataa. tonee ko bhee ye galle par n chhodate. shaam ko ajamer hotaa. pahale vaalee mauj ab fir gaayab ho gaee thee. ajamer subah samay se shoping karane nikal jaataa aur dukaan kholane tak bamushkil lautataa. fir akelaa hee saaraa saamaan vain men se utaarataa. usake lie yah kaam bahut ho jaataa.
us din satanaam haaeebaree gayaa to gurindar bolee-
''main tujhe fon karane vaalee thee.''
''jattiye, mujhase kyaa kaam pad gayaa ?''
''kahate hain n ki jis jeb men daane hon, us se hee hailo kee jaatee hai.''
''meree jeb men daane kahaan hain ?''
''too chaaloo cheez hai. sabhee bhaaiyon kee chaalaakee tere akele men hai.''
''ye prem chopadaa ?''
''vo to yoon hee badanaam hai. jaise kahate hai n, ghuggee shaitaan aur kauaa badanaam.''
''jattiye, baaz ko ghuggee n kah. chal too kaam kee baat kar.''
''too naa naheen karegaa.''
''pahale kabhee kee hai ?''
''hamen do din subah ke lie shindaa chaahie. tayooj-de aur thars-de morning. tere bhaajee se ab vain lod-analod naheen hotee, paseenaa aae jaataa hai.''
''savere jab bhaaee ne jaanaa ho to udhar se usako pik kar liyaa kare.''
''usase bhee poochh lenaa, vo aaegaa bhee ki naheen.''
''aaegaa kyon naheen....''
dukaan men se nikalataa satanaam badabadaa rahaa thaa, ''prem chopadaa to baahar rahakar gol kar gayaa !''
satanaam kaa adhik kuchh naheen bigadaa thaa. shindaa sirf do din hee udhar jaataa thaa, vah bhee gyaarah baje tak laut aataa. satanaam ne apanee shoping ke din badal lie the. parantu usako ek kheejh-see chadhee rahatee thee. vah sochataa ki do din kee tanakhvaah bhee ajamer hee de, par vah munh se kuchh naheen kahataa thaa.
jis din shindaa ajamer ke yahaan se aataa to bahut khush hotaa. vah bataane lagataa-
''aaj to jattee ne hamaare pahunchane se pahale hee aaloo ke paraanthe banaae hue the aur saath hee maingo lassee. bolee- khaa lo pahale, fir vain men se saamaan utaaranaa. bhaajee ulatakar gusse men bolaa- agar vaardan tikat kaat gayaa to ?''
ek din shindaa bolaa-
''bhaajee to meraa kuchh jyaadaa hee fikr kie jaataa hai. kahataa hai, haath n katavaa lenaa.''
satanaam pahale hee eershyaa men bharaa padaa thaa, bolaa-
''tab usakaa fikr kahaan gayaa thaa jab saaree-saaree raat tujh par sharaab undelataa thaa.''
sunakar shindaa jhenp gayaa aur aage kuchh n bolaa. raat ko rotee khaataa satanaam manajeet se bolaa-
''baat sun meree smitaa paatil, ye teraa devar niraa hee asaraanee banaa ghoomataa hai. ise prem chopadaa snjeev kumaar dikhaaee detaa hai.''
aahistaa-aahistaa sabhee ko yah rooteen mnzoor ho gayaa. shindaa itavaar ko bhee ajamer ke saath kaam karavaane jaataa. savere uthakar satanaam kee dukaan men aa jaataa. haurnazee rod kee is pared men shinde ko sabhee jaanane lag pade the. vah khaalee hotaa to yoon hee kisee doosaree dukaan men jaa khadaa hotaa. sab jaanate the ki vah satanaam kaa bhaaee hai. abdulaa kee dukaan par botal lene bhee vahee jaataa. kabhee kaantee patel kee dukaan se bhee le aataa. abdulaa usako rok letaa aur kahataa-
''saradaar jee, apanee dukaan chhodakar doosaree par kyon jaason.''
''khaan saahib, main to bailens rakhane kee koshish kar rahaa hoon. pachaas botalen tumase aur ek vahaan se. aur fir vah meet bhee hamase hee letaa hai.''
''mainne to pahale hee satanaam se kahaa thaa ki halaal rakhaa karo.''
''jinhonne halaal rakhaa huaa hai, unakaa bhee mujhe pataa hai.''
''dekho jee, hamen halaal kaa kahakar denge to saaree jimmedaaree unakee hee hosee.''
''aise to ham bhee halaal kaa fattaa lagaa lete hain.''
kahakar shindaa chalane lagataa to abdulaa usake baig men biyar kaa dibbaa daal detaa, par shindaa kaantee patel kee dukaan men jaa ghusataa.
ek din paitro satanaam ko bataane lagaa-
''saim, mujhe lagataa hai, shainee til men se har roz paanch kaa not letaa hai. pahale to main sochataa thaa ki yah meraa shak hai. par fir mainne dhyaan se chaik kiyaa. paanch paund lekar fir baahar se sharaab pee aataa hai.''
''tabhee jaldee sharaabee ho jaataa hai.... chalo, koee baat naheen, paanch paund hee hain.''
''saim, too maalik hai, jo marjee kah. mainne to sochaa thaa ki apane paise kam hote dekh too kisee aur ko n pakadataa fire.''
kahakar paitro ne kndhe hilaaye aur dubaaraa kaam karane lag padaa. satanaam baahar se to muskaraa rahaa thaa, par andar se vah jal-bhun gayaa. paanch paund kee baat naheen thee, baat to choree karane kee thee. kaheen sach men hee juaais ko paise n khilaataa ho. fir vah us baat kee or se apanaa dhyaan hataate hue apane ko dilaasaa dene lag padaa.
agale din shindaa ajamer ke saath shoping karavaakar naheen lautaa. vaise vah gyaarah baje tak laut aataa thaa. par baarah baj chuke the. fir ek baj gayaa. satanaam yaad karane lagaa ki raat men koee baat to naheen huee thee usakee. yaad karane par vah sabakuchh samajh gayaa. usane nashe men shinde ko kahaa thaa-
''bade jvail theef ! agar paanch se guzaaraa naheen hotaa, to paanch aur le liyaa kar.''
(jaaree…)
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gavaaksh – faravaree 2012

janavaree 2008 “gavaaksh” blog ke maadhyam se ham hindee blog-premiyon ko videshon men rah rahe hindee/pnjaabee ke un lekhakon/kaviyon kee samakaaleen rachanaaon se roo-b-roo karavaane kaa prayaas karate aa rahe hain jo apane vatan hindustaan se koson door rahakar apane samay aur samaaj ke yathaarth ko apanee rachanaaon men rekhaankit kar rahe hain. “gavaaksh” men ab tak vishaal (italee), divyaa maathur (lndan), anil janavijay (maasko), devee naagaraanee(yoo.es.e.), tejendr sharmaa(lndan), rachanaa shreevaastav(lndan), poornimaa varman(dubaee), ilaa prasaad(yoo es e), bhagat dhavan (denamaark), chaand shuklaa (denamaark), ved prakaash ‘vatuk’(yoo es e), rekhaa maitr (yoo es e), tanadeep tamannaa (kanaadaa), praan sharmaa (yoo ke), sukhindar (kanaadaa), surajeet(kanaadaa), do sudhaa dheengaraa(amerikaa), minnee grevaal(kanaadaa), balavindar chahal (nyoojeelaind), balabeer kaur snghedaa(kanaadaa), shail agravaal (inglaind), shraddhaa jain (singaapur), daa. sukhapaal(kanaadaa), prem maan(yoo.es.e.), (sv.) ikabaal arpan, sushree meenaa chopadaa (kanaadaa), daa. haradeep kaur sndhu(aastreliyaa), daa. bhaavanaa kunar(aastreliyaa), anupamaa paathak (sveedan), shivacharan jaggee kussaa(lndan), jasabeer maahal(kanaadaa), mnju mishraa (amerikaa), sukhindar (kanaadaa), devindar kaur (yoo ke) aur neeroo aseem(kainedaa) aadi kee rachanaaen aur pnjaabee kathaakaar-upanyaasakaar harajeet atavaal ke upanyaas “savaaree” ke hindee anuvaad kee tentaaleesaveen kist aapane padheen. “gavaaksh” ke faravaree 12 ank men prastut hain – mnju mishr kee kuchh kavitaaen tathaa harajeet atavaal ke dhaaraavaahik pnjaabee upanyaas “savaaree” kee chauvaaleesaveen kist kaa hindee anuvaad…

kailiforniyaa(yoo.es.e.) se

mnju mishraa kee kuchh kavitaaen

khvaahishen - kuchh alag alag rng

1
meree khvaahishon ne
rishte jod lie aasamaanon se
ugaa lie hain pnkha
aur udane lagee hain havaaon men
ab to bas !
khudaa hee khair kare !!
2
allaah !
ye khvaahishon kee udaana
kaheen, dam hee n le le
khudaa hee jaane,
paanv kahaan tak saath denge ?
3
roshanee chubhatee hain
paanvon ke chhaale footate hain
aankhon ke khvaab dam todate hain
aise men bhee jeene kee khvaahisha
vallaah ..
jindagee bhee kyaa cheej hai !
4
kitanee khvaahishon ne
dam tode hain
tab kaheen jaa kara
yah tajurbe kee chaandee chadhee hai
baal dhoop men naheen pakate !!

kshanikaaen : chalo juganoo batoren...

1
rishte,
bunee huyee chaadara
ek dhaagaa tootaa
bas udhad gae…
2
deharee ke die kee
lau kaanpatee hai,
baahar aandhiyaan tej hain
3
hameshaa anaban-see rahee,
aankhen aur hotha
alag-alag raag alaapate rahe
4
chalo juganoo batoren
chaand taare
milen n milen …

mutthee bhar sukh kaa paavanaa

samaya
jab apanee bahee khol kar baithaa
hisaab karane,
to main
soch men pad gayee...

pataa hee naheen chalaa
kaba
mutthee bhar sukh kaa paavanaa
itanaa badh gayaa, ki
saaree umr beet gayee
sood chukaate chukaate
mool fir bhee
jas kaa tas

sannaataa : alag-alag andaaz

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yoon to
khaamosh hai raata
par sannaate kaa bhee
apanaa alag raag hai

suno to kaan dekar -
sunaaee dengee
raat kee sisakiyaan
2
khaamosh see fijaayen
chup chup -saa hai samaan
fir bhee raata
sannaatee naheen
3
tod lo
magar khaamoshee se,
sitaaron ke fool...
chaand n jaage
sannaate kaa jaadoo toot jaayegaa
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mnju mishraa
janm : 28 joon 1959, lakhanaoo(uttar pradesh).
shikshaa : em. e.(hindee)
srijan : kavitaaen, haaiku, kshanikaaen, muktak aur gazal.
samprati : vyaapaar vikaas prabndhak, kailiforniyaa (yoo.es.e.)
blog : http://manukavya.wordpress.koma
eemel : manjushishra@gmail.com

dhaaraavaahik pnjaabee upanyaas(kist- 44)

savaaree

harajeet atavaal
hindee anuvaad : subhaash neerav

॥ unachaas ॥
satanaam ne drink daalakar haath men pakadee huee thee. n pee rahaa thaa aur n hee mej par rakh rahaa thaa. nashe men hone kee vajah se haath hil jaataa aur sharaab chhalak jaatee. donon bachche paas hee baithe the. manajeet ghar kaa kaam karatee idhar-udhar aa-jaa rahee thee. teleevizan par nayaa eshiyan prograam lagaa rakhaa thaa. bachchon ne dekhaa ki usakaa dhyaan kaheen aur thaa to unhonne aahistaa se rimot dabaakar kaartoon lagaa lie. manajeet ne poochhaa -
''rotee le aaoon ki ho gayaa ?''
''dinpal kapaadiyaa, prem chopadaa ne meraa saath diyaa, shinde ko tareeke se nikaalakar le gayaa jaise makkhan men se baal nikaalate hain. isakaa koee tod soch, meree dinpal kapaadiyaa.''
''sochanaa kyaa hai, doosaraa aadamee rakh lo.''
''toone baat kar dee n tunatun vaalee. are, tujhe bataayaa to hai ki skild buchchar do dhaaee sau maangate hain.''
''aur tum to kahate the ki aarthar hai.''
''hai, aarthar bhee, vah bhee isase kam men naheen maanataa.''
''itanaa !''
''isee tarah ke yoddhe milate hain sau men, yah to aise hotaa hai jaise amitaabh bachchan ke aage rishee kapoor.''
usane gilaas men se chhotaa-saa paig bharaa aur bolaa-
''prem chopadaa seedhe hee sau pond hafte kaa bachaa gayaa. tonee letaa thaa do sau aur ye mukaree vahee kaam karegaa sau men.''
''tum kah dete, hamaaraa gujaaraa naheen hotaa shinde ke binaa.''
''tujhe pataa hai bindoo ki main usake saamane binaa piye bol naheen sakataa.''
''peekar bol lo.''
''ab saanp nikal gayaa, lakeer ko peetataa rahoon ! usake paas bahaanaa hee aisaa thaa ki tonee chhuttiyaan par jaa rahaa hai. shinde ke kaaran mainne maaiko ko hataa diyaa thaa.''
satanaam jaanataa thaa ki ab maaiko vaapas aane ke lie nakhare dikhaaegaa. tanakhvaah badhaane ke lie bhee zor daalegaa. maaiko ko vaapas laane kaa tareekaa ek hee thaa ki aarthar ko kaam par rakhane kaa bhay dikhaayaa jaae. vaise aarthar ko kaam par rakhakar vah jyaadaa khush naheen hotaa, kyonki aarthar bhee vishvasaneey vyakti naheen thaa ki kab kaam chhodakar chalataa bane. shinde kaa is prakaar jaanaa usako ek dhakke kee bhaanti lagaa. shinde ke sir par dukaan chhodakar vah kaheen bhee ho aataa thaa. kaee kaee ghnte baahar rah sakataa thaa. shinde kaa vaapas lautanaa ab itanaa saral naheen thaa.
maaiko pun: usake sng kaam karane aa lagaa. sab kuchh pahale kee bhaanti ho gayaa, par shinde vaalaa abhaav pooraa naheen hotaa thaa. shinde ko sabhee yaad karate. sabhee usakee baaten karate rahate, khaasataur par juaais. vah to shinde se milane ajamer kee dukaan par bhee ho aatee. yadi ajamer vahaan hotaa to use dekhakar aankhen nikaalane lag padataa. vah usako dekhate hee laut padatee. kabhee kabhee mageel juaais se kahane lagataa -
''mujhe teree bahut chintaa hai.''
''kyon ?''
''sochataa hoon ki shainee(shinde) ke binaa teraa dil kaise lagataa hogaa ?''
''too fikr n kar bungdhe, teree mujhe zaroorat naheen padane vaalee.''
yah sach thaa ki vah shinde kee kamee mahasoos karatee thee. vah shinde ko pyaar karane lagee thee. vah satanaam se kahane lagatee-
''teraa bhaaee bahut achchhaa hai. is duniyaa men bure logon kee chalatee hai, usake jaise shareefon kee naheen.''
usakee baat sunakar satanaam man hee man bolaa ki yadi shareef hotaa to saalaa paartiyaan n badalataa ghoomataa.
shinde kaa chale jaanaa kuchh din tak to usase sveekaar hee naheen huaa thaa. fir vah sochane lagaa ki koshish jaaree rakhanee chaahie ki kisee tarah vah vaapas aa jaae. shinde ke hote jo faayade the, shinde ke chale jaane par aur adhik ubhar kar saamane aane lage. vah haaeebaree pahale kee tarah hee jaataa. jab se usane dukaan kholee thee, hafte men do-teen baar taazaa spring laimb ajamer ko dekar aataa thaa. jis din bhee naee dileevaree aatee to vah gujarate hue do pond meet udhar de jaataa. ab bhee jaataa. usakaa tonee, shinde aur gurindar ke saath bhee hnsee-majaak chalataa rahataa thaa. gurindar usakee kaee baaton par kheejh bhee uthatee, par usake aane par lagataa ki aasapaas kaa vaataavaran harakat men aa rahaa hai. ajamer ke svabhaav kaa to pataa hee naheen thaa ki kis vakt usako chadh jaaegee aur doosare kee vah utaar kar rakh degaa.
satanaam shinde ko chhedataa huaa kahataa-
''achchhaa bhalaa meet kaa kaam seekh chalaa thaa, indiyaa jaakar beshak gaanv ke adde par meet kee dukaan khol letaa.''
pratyuttar men shindaa kahataa-
''tum bhaaee bhaaee jaisaa marjee karo, chaahe mujhe jhatakaaee banaao yaa thekedaar yaa fir muneer vaalaa vaangaloo.''
ek din gurindar satanaam se bolee-
''tere bhaajee ko to pataa hee naheen chalataa kuchh, dekh baladev ko gae kitanaa vakt ho gayaa. bechaaraa lautakar naheen aayaa. jaa, too hee bulaa laa usako.''
''jattiye, mujhe lagataa hai, vah ab intaraval ke baad hee aaegaa.''
gurindar ko usakee yah baat achchhee n lagee aur kahane lagee-
''itane maheene ho gae, abhee tak tumhaaraa intaraval hee naheen huaa ? main to kahatee hoon ki ajeeb bhaaee ho tum log, munh par ek dooje kee taareefen karane lagate ho, zaraa idhar-udhar hue naheen ki too kaun, main kaun.''
''jattiye, saaree duniyaa hee aisee hai.''
biyar kaa ghoont bharakar ajamer kahane lagaa-
''isane to bhaee lahoo pee liyaa.''
''kisane ?''
''ye shinde ke bachche ne.''
''kyaa baat ho gaee ?''
''kuchh n poochh, n saalaa tonee jaataa, n yah jadon men baithataa. ab tonee ko saain karake jyaadaa paise dene honge. vah ful taaim ko maanataa hee naheen.''
usakee baat sunataa satanaam billee jhapatte ke lie taiyaar hotaa huaa bolaa-
''main bhee sunoon, yah kahataa kyaa hai ?''
''kahanaa kyaa hai, savere uthataa hee peene lag padataa hai. kuchh saamane peetaa hai aur kuchh choree se. oopar se sigareten bhee peetaa hai.''
''achchhaa, sigareton kaa to mujhe naheen pataa.''
''mainne to pakadaa hai ise. mainne pooraa hisaab lagaakar dekhaa ki isakaa das se pandrah pond kaa faalatoo kharch hai roz kaa. lagaakar dekh hisaab, baat kahaan pahunchatee hai. main to pareshaan huaa padaa hoon.''
''yah to bilakul galat hai, dukaanen itanaa bojh kahaan jhelatee hain. ise samajhaanaa thaa.''
''samajhaaoon kyaa !... agar kuchh kahoon to gussaa ho jaataa hai. lahoo pee rakhaa hai. gurindar alag ladane lagatee hai.''
''gussaa hone kaa kyaa matalab huaa. jab vah galatee karataa hai to rokanaa to huaa hee. churaa kar peene kaa kyaa matalab ! dhamakaanaa thaa zaraa.''
''kyaa dhamakaaoon ! pahale baladev chhotee see baat par gussaa hokar chalaa gayaa jaise koee dndaa maaraa ho... ab ise kuchh kahaa to... ise itanaa samajh men naheen aataa ki isakee tanakhvaah to edavaans men isakee aurat ko de aayaa hoon.''
''bhaaee, koee baat naheen. hausalaa rakh. main isako samajhaataa hoon, baat isake khaane men daalataa hoon.”
''mainne to mazaboor hokar hee baat tujhe bataaee hai, too hee isake saath baat kar.''
pab men se uthakar ve dukaan par aa gae. satanaam ne shinde kee taraf dekhaa. shinde ne nazaren jhukaa leen. satanaam ne kahaa-
''aa bhaee gabbar sinh, ek do baaten karen.''
shindaa gallaa chhodakar baahar nikal aayaa. usake haath kaanp rahe the. satanaam ne chintit hokar poochhaa-
''kyoon, kyaa huaa tujhe ?''
''kuchh naheen, yoon hee sir saa dukhataa hai.''
satanaam usake kndhe par haath rakh usako dukaan men se baahar le aayaa. shindaa kahane lagaa-
''yaar, bhaajee mere saath bahut buraa vyavahaar karataa hai. raat men jee bhar kar peetaa hai aur fir mere par hee bigadataa hai. mujhe to vaapas indiyaa hee chadhaa do, yahaan meree kutte baraabar kadar naheen.''
''is mulk men kutton ke to men rol hote hen... too yoon n devadaas vaalaa rol kie jaa.''
''meree to bas karavaa dee isane. laakh rupayaa kyaa de aayaa hai, ab baaton se meraa khoon peenaa chaahataa hai.''
''baat yah hai bhaee ki ek to sharaab kam kar aur dhyaan se kaam kar. jisane tanakhvaah denee hai, vo kaam to chaahegaa hee.''
''main kaam se kab inkaar karataa hoon.''
''sharaab to peetaa hai n.''
''yah to bhaajee ne mujhe apaset hee itanaa kiyaa huaa hai ki rahaa naheen jaataa.''
''soch le, agar naheen dil lagataa to udhar aa jaa, par meraa naam n lenaa.''
shindaa kuchh n bolaa. vah pun: dukaan men aa gae.
ghar pahunchakar satanaam manajeet se kahane lagaa-
''o meree poonam dhillon, teraa devar aa rahaa hai, ek room sait kar de.''
''sach, baladev maan gayaa ?''
''aree sharmilaa taigor, teraa ek hee devar hai kaheen. udhar jattee ko bhee baladev kee hee padee huee hai, saalaa baladev hee snjay datt ho gayaa. saaraa mood hee kharaab kar diyaa.''
''aur kaun aa rahaa hai ?''
''shindaa ! udhar prem chopadaa kee usake saath shooting theek naheen chal rahee.''
''shinde ko ham naheen rakhenge. main to kisee ko bhee naheen rakhanaa chaahatee. par shinde ko to bilakul hee naheen. jaakar bahan jee se poochho, kitanaa gandaa hai vah.''
''zaraa hosh se kaam le, hameshaa bindoo hee n banee rahaa kar. ab hamen usakee sakht zaroorat hai. soch kar dekh, usake aane se hamaare kitane paise bachate hain. aur fir ghar men, meree bhee chal lene diyaa kar. too mujhe heero to kyaa, saaid heero bhee naheen samajhatee.''
(jaaree…)
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gavaaksh – janavaree 2012

janavaree 2008 “gavaaksh” blog ke maadhyam se ham hindee blog-premiyon ko videshon men rah rahe hindee/pnjaabee ke un lekhakon/kaviyon kee samakaaleen rachanaaon se roo-b-roo karavaane kaa prayaas karate aa rahe hain jo apane vatan hindustaan se koson door rahakar apane samay aur samaaj ke yathaarth ko apanee rachanaaon men rekhaankit kar rahe hain. “gavaaksh” men ab tak vishaal (italee), divyaa maathur (lndan), anil janavijay (maasko), devee naagaraanee(yoo.es.e.), tejendr sharmaa(lndan), rachanaa shreevaastav(lndan), poornimaa varman(dubaee), ilaa prasaad(yoo es e), bhagat dhavan (denamaark), chaand shuklaa (denamaark), ved prakaash ‘vatuk’(yoo es e), rekhaa maitr (yoo es e), tanadeep tamannaa (kanaadaa), praan sharmaa (yoo ke), sukhindar (kanaadaa), surajeet(kanaadaa), do sudhaa dheengaraa(amerikaa), minnee grevaal(kanaadaa), balavindar chahal (nyoojeelaind), balabeer kaur snghedaa(kanaadaa), shail agravaal (inglaind), shraddhaa jain (singaapur), daa. sukhapaal(kanaadaa), prem maan(yoo.es.e.), (sv.) ikabaal arpan, sushree meenaa chopadaa (kanaadaa), daa. haradeep kaur sndhu(aastreliyaa), daa. bhaavanaa kunar(aastreliyaa), anupamaa paathak (sveedan), shivacharan jaggee kussaa(lndan), jasabeer maahal(kanaadaa), mnju mishraa (amerikaa), sukhindar (kanaadaa) aur devindar kaur (yoo ke) aadi kee rachanaaen aur pnjaabee kathaakaar-upanyaasakaar harajeet atavaal ke upanyaas “savaaree” ke hindee anuvaad kee ikataaleesaveen kist aapane padheen. “gavaaksh” ke janavaree ank men prastut hain – neeroo aseem(kainedaa) kee pnjaabee kavitaa tathaa harajeet atavaal ke dhaaraavaahik pnjaabee upanyaas “savaaree” kee bayaaleesaveen kist kaa hindee anuvaad…

kainedaa se
neeroo aseem kee kavitaa
pnjaabee se anuvaad : subhaash neerav

ladakee

usane ladakee ko kahaa
too chidiyaa, too havaa
ladakee udatee rahee
aur samajhatee rahee
vah chidiyaa, vah havaa

usane ladakee se kahaa
too to abalaa bahut
ladakee hairaan thee
fir bhee chup hee rahee
maan gaee sahaj bhaav se
lagee prateekshaa karane
surkh ujaale ke raah

usane ladakee se kahaa
jaag ai durgaa maan
ladakee ne zindagee ko
morchaa banaa liyaa
kadam kadam par
yuddh kaa
bigul bajaa liyaa
aur ladakee ladatee rahee
khatm hotee rahee
maratee rahee

fir ladakee ne kahaa
main sahaj rooh hoon
main sahaj praan hoon
main kuchh aur naheen

n mere lie
koee alag nizaam
n mere any naam
n nyaare paigaam
main vahee hoon jo hoon

main yugon se yugon tak
ek silasilaa

main sahaj rooh hoon
main sahaj praan hoon
fir ladakee ne kahaa
main koee aur naheen...
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(yah kavitaa pnjaabee kavayitree surajeet ke blog 'srijanahaaree' men pnjaabee men prakaashit huee hai)

kavayitree kaa ee meljindal_neeru@yahoo.ca