khoob gujregee jo mil baithenge deevaane do

haan, to pichhalee post men jo sher mainne aapako padhvaayaa thaa vah sher kahaa thaa jagatamohan laal ravaan saahab ne.

main kah rahaa thaa ki yah sher do din pahale saiyad riyaaj raheem saahab ke saath baatacheet ke dauraan mere saamane aayaa. mainne yah misaraa to bahut sun rakhaa hai- 'khoob gujregee jo mil baithenge deevaane do.' makbooliyat aisee ki yah logon kee zabaan par hai aur isakaa istemaal vijnyaapan tak men huaa hai. lekin 'qais jngal men akelaa hai mujhe jaane do' vaalaa misaraa mainne pahalee baar sunaa. (kaee achchhee baaten zindagee men pahalee baar hee hotee hain:))

baat aage badhee to riyaaj saahab ne is sher ke taalluk se jo kahaa vah aapako bhee sunaataa hoon- 'is sher kaa naam lie bagair urdoo shaayar kee taareekh naamukammal hai kyonki yah sher aamad (pravaah) kaa sher hai. shaayaree ke taalluk se urdoo men aamad aur aavard- do baaten kahee jaatee hain. aavard kee shaayaree men fikr to ho sakatee hai lekin jrooree naheen ki vah shaayaree dilon ko chhoo jaae. jahaan tak aamad kee shaayaree hai to vah dilon ko to chhootee hee hai; isake saath-saath sochane ke lie nae raaste bhee paidaa karatee hai.'

ab faisalaa aap keejie ki ravaan saahab ke is sher ke taalluk se riyaaj saahab jo framaa rahe the vah durust hai yaa naheen. mujhe to ekadam durust lagaa jee!

ravaan saahab ke chnd aur asha'aar pesh-e-khidamat hain-

hiraas-o-havas-e-hayaat-e-faanee n gayee
is dil se ummeed-e-kaamaraanee n gayee

hai sng-e-mazaar par teraa naam ravaan
mar kar bhee ummeed-e-zindagaanee n gayee

paabandi-e-zauk, ahal-e-dil kyaa maa'nee
dilachaspi-e-jins-e-mujmahal kyaa maa'nee

ai naazim-e-kaayanaat kuchh to batalaa
aakhir ye tilism-e-aab-o-gul kyaa maa'nee

dhanyavaad!