upanyaas kaa athaarahavaan pannaa!

madanaseeng bhee chalaa gayaa kashmeer!

hasamukh ne....madanaseeng, jo usakee patnee kokilaa kaa bhootapoorv premee hai....use kashmeer n jaane kis kaam se bhejaa hai!.....kashmeer kee lokeshns par bahut see filmen banee hai!...madan aur kokilaa kee chhabee kuchh aisee najar ke saamane aa rahee hai....film 'kashmeer kee kalee' ke naayak aur naayikaa kee tarah!

beshak foto...googal se saabhaar lee gaee hai!......

upanyaas 'kokilaa....' saraahaa jaa rahaa hai!....aage kee kadiyaan jaldee jaldee likhane ke lie kaee mitron kee taraf se kahaa jaa rahaa hai!...lekin sahaj pake so meethaa!...meree kalam apanee madhyam gati ke saath hee prayaan kar rahee hai!...bahut achchhaa lag rahaa hai ki main akelee naheen hoon...mere saath kaafilaa chal rahaa hai!....agar kaafile saath jud kar aap bhee mauj-mastee ke saath chalanaa chaahen, to chale aaie!

link aap ke saamane hai!
http://readerblogs.navbharattimes.indiatimes.com/mujhekuchhkehnahai/entry/18-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%9C-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%88-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%89%E0%A4%AA%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%AF-%E0%A4%B8

upanyaas kaa satrahavaan pannaa!

havaa ke saath saath....

panne palatten jaa rahe hai!
tej jhonke havaa ke aa aa kar...
mej par padee meree daayaree ko
jor jor se hilaa-dulaa kar...
apane sng kaheen door tak udaa kar....
le jaane kee koshish men hai....
par daayaree naheen chhod rahee apanee jagah....
sirf panne palataten jaa rahe hai....

daayaree men likhaa huaa hai...
ek ek din kaa kaaranaamaa...
kis se huaa milanaa..
aur kis se huaa bichhadanaa...
kisee se kiyaa huaa vaadaa...
jab nibhaayaa n gayaa....
tab aur honaa bhee kyaa thaa...
achchhaa khaasaa manamutaav huaa...
likhaa huaa hai aage ki...
ve najaren fer kar jaa rahe hai....
aur panne palataten jaa rahe hai!

havaane kuchh jor aur lagaayaa....
achaanak se bees panne....
fadafadaahat ke saath palat gae....
bahut kuchh badal gayaa thaa....
mere hoth koee pyaaraa saa geet...
yoonhee mastee men gun -gunaa rahe the....
geeton ke bol saaf najar aa rahe hai...
lekin panne to palataten jaa rahe hai!

pataa naheen ye kavitaa kaisee ban padee hai...lekin upanyaas kee kahaanee bees saal aage nikal gaee hai!...kisee bhee tarah kee koee boriyat die bagair....link dekhie....


http://readerblogs.navbharattimes.indiatimes.com/mujhekuchhkehnahai/entry/17-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%9C-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%88-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%89%E0%A4%AA%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%AF-%E0%A4%B8

upanyaas kaa solahavaan pannaa!

upanyaas 'kokilaa...' aage badh rahaa hai!

....yah upanyaas poorv prakaashit naheen hai!...is upanyaas kee khareedaaree ke baare men jaanane ke lie mujhe kuchh i-mel praapt hue hai!...unhen mainne alag se javaab bhejaa hai!

...sabhee kee jaanakaaree ke lie yah bataanaa aavashyak hai ki yah upanyaas nbt..(navabhaarat-taaims) ke mere blog 'mujhe kuchh kahanaa hai' ...par se hee aon-laain prakaashit kiyaa jaa rahaa hai!...yaheen ise padhaa jaa sakataa hai!...fesabuk par bhee isakaa link diyaa jaa rahaa hai!

aaj ke solahave panne kaa link hai......

http://readerblogs.navbharattimes.indiatimes.com/mujhekuchhkehnahai/entry/16-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%9C-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%88-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%89%E0%A4%AA%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%AF-%E0%A4%B8

upanyaas kaa padrahavaan pannaa!

...kalpanaaon ke pnkhon par savaar!


kavitaaon men varnit amaavas kee raat....
kuchh jyaadaa hee kaalikh lie hotee hai....
aise men bhoot-preton kee kahaaniyaan....
kuchh jyaadaa hee chitt-vedhak hotee hai....

raat kaa sannaataa kuchh jyaadaa hee daraavanaa,
sannaate ko bhng karatee nishaacharon kee aavaajen...
toofaanee havaaon kaa achaanak se aagaman....
pedon kaa...patton kaa vichitrataa se hilanaa-dulanaa...
ek kavi kaa had se jyaadaa dar jaanaa....
be-mausam kee baarish kaa bhee...
usee samay,achaanak se aagaman...
bijaliyon kaa kadakanaa...
aashray kee khoj men kavi...
dar kar idhar udhar bhatakanaa....
koee tootaa-footaa puraanaa ghar....
aashray usee ghar men lenaa....

fir daravaajaa khulane kee charamaraahat...
khaalee khndahar numaa ghar men...
cham-gidadon ke...
pnkhon kee fadafadaahat....
fir kaheen kisee kamare se aatee....
chham..chham..chham...bajatee...paayal kee dhvanee....
fir ek baar...
kavi kaa had se jyaadaa dar jaanaa...
kavi ke dil kee badhatee dhadakan...

aur kisee sundaree kaa....
had se jyaadaa sundar cheharaa...
shareer nadaarad....sirf ek cheharaa....
kavi par chhaayaa huaa behoshee kaa aalam...
mrityu ke najadeek honekaa....
anubhav letaa sahamaasaa man....

kavitaa-kahaaniyon men....
aksar mil jaataa hai,kuchh bhee....
kyaa kavi...kyaa lekhak...
apanee vichitr-kalpanaaon ke chitr....
kaagaz par utaar deten hai...kabhee, kabhee!

...' kokilaa...' bhee ek aisee hee kahaanee hai.....kapol-kalpit....( foto googal se saabhaar lee gaee hai)
link dekhen.....

http://readerblogs.navbharattimes.indiatimes.com/mujhekuchhkehnahai/entry/15-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%9C-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%88-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%89%E0%A4%AA%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%AF-%E0%A4%B8

upanyaas kaa chaudahavaan pannaa!

tippaniyon kee ahamiyat....

tippaniyon kee ahamiyat bahut badee hotee hai...sabhee blogars is baat ko bhalee bhaanti jaanate hai!...aapasee prem, sadbhaavanaa aur mitrataa badhaane men tippaniyaan aham bhoomikaa nibhaatee hai!...likhee gaee post ko padhe jaane kaa pramaan bhee tippanee dvaaraa hee milataa hai!...tippanee lekhak kee haajaree kaa pramaan bhee tippanee se hee blog lekhak ko mil jaataa hai!...tippanee kee sabase badee upayogitaa to tab najar aatee hai,jab yah preranaadaayee saabit hotee hai yaane ki blog lekhak ko avirat likhate rahane ke lie prerit karatee hai!

.....lekin kuchh tippaneekaar apane tippanee dene ke adhikaar kaa durupayog bhee karate hai!...blog lekhak kee nindaa yaa buraaee karane se kataraate naheen hai!...abhadr bhaashaa kaa prayog bhee binaa soche-samajhe karate hai!...agar unhen blog kaa vishay pasnd naheen hai to tippanee men sirf ' naa- pasnda' likh kar apane vichaaron ko vyakti de sakate hai!...vaise naa-pasnd blog post par tippanee dene kee jarurat hee kyaa hai?

...aur ek baat blog lekhakon ke lie....agar tippaniyaan kam milatee hai to ghabaraane kee yaa blog likhanaa bnd karane kee jarurat naheen hai!...vaise hee kisee galat tippanee ke milate...maayoos yaa du:khee hone kee jarurat bhee naheen hai!...yahaan blog post kamaaee ke naheen likhe jaate aur tippaniyaan bhee kamaaee kaa jariyaa naheen hai!....to chintaa kis baat kee!

....kisee blogar ko jyaadaa tippaniyaan milatee hai to us blogar se jalan yaa vair bhaav man men paalanaa, bachakaanee harakat hai!...ho sakataa hai ki vah jyaadaa mehanatee aur milanasaar svabhaav kaa ho aur isee vajah se usake mitron kee snkhyaa bhee badee ho!....us jaisaa banane kee koshish aap bhee kar sakate hai!

..yah samajhanaa bhee theek naheen hai ki aap ko isalie tippaniyaan kam mil rahee hai...kyon ki aap kaa lekhan stareey naheen hai!...aisaa sochanaa aap ke andar heen bhaavanaa paidaa kar sakataa hai aur aapake lekhan par yaa aapakee rachanaatmakataa par bhee isakaa buraa asar pad sakataa hai!.....to uthaaie knpyootar men istemaal hone vaalee kalam aur likhie blog post!....haan!...tippaniyon dvaaraa bhee aap apanee krietivitee jataa sakate hai!

not....is blog post par tippanee denaa yaa n denaa aap kee ichchhaa par nirbhar hai!....'knpalasaree' naheen hai!

upanyaas ' kokilaa...' binaa kisee baadhaa ke aage badh rahaa hai!...koshish yahee hai ki kahaanee men aakhir tak rahasy aur rochakataa banee rahe!

link..... http://readerblogs.navbharattimes.indiatimes.com/mujhekuchhkehnahai/entry/14-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%9C-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%88-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%89%E0%A4%AA%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%AF-%E0%A4%B8

upanyaas kaa terahavaan pannaa!

andh-vishvaas...
aur ham!

....aaj upanyaas kaa terahavaan pannaa prastut karate hue...sahaj hee man men khyaal aayaa ki videshon men 13 kaa ank ashubh yaa' an-lakee' maanaa jaataa hai!...hamaare desh men bhee andh-vishvaas kaa andheraa prachur maatraa men chhaayaa huaa hai!...padhe-likhe kyaa...anapadh kyaa...sabhee tarah ke log is andhakaar kee chhaayaa men aankhe bnd kar ke saans le rahe hai!...

....shaayad bhavishy men ghatit hone vaalee achchhee yaa buree ghatanaaon ke baare men pahale se jaan n paane kee vajah se logon ke man men dar paidaa huaa...aur isee dar ne andh-vishvaas ko janm diyaa! kuchh chaalaak yaa thag kism ke logon ne aam logon kee isee maanasikataa yaa dar kee bhaavanaa kaa faayadaa uthaayaa...aur is kadee ko aage badhaaten gae!...in thagon ne svayn ko trikaal-jnyaanee ke taur par pradarshit kiyaa aur bhavishy ke garbh men chhipee huee ghatanaaon kee jaanakaaree rakhane kaa daavaa pesh kiyaa!....logon ko kathit yaa sahee du:kh-dard aur snkaton se mukti dilavaane kaa nek kaam aise thag log karane lage! ...aise hee log 'baabaa' ke naam se jaane aur pooje jaane lage!...jaahir hai ki bhagavaan yaa daivee shakti ke naam par dhan bhee in baabaaon ne ainthanaa shuroo kiyaa!....ab aadhunik baabaaon ne bhagavaan aur daivee shakti ke saath saath saayns ko bhee jod diyaa hai!...jisase ki jyaadaa se jyaadaa logon ko vishvaas men liyaa jaa saken!

khair!..kuchh log aise bhee hai jo is andh-vishvaas roopee andhakaar se ghire huon ko baahar nikaal kar, bnd aankhen kholane kee salaah de rahe hai....ujaale kee aur dekhane ke lie prerit bhee kar rahe hai!...baabaaon kee asaliyat bhee saamane aa rahee hai!...lekin jahaan ek baabaa kee pol khul jaatee hai....vahaan doosare baabaa jagah lete jaa rahe hai!....vishaal desh bhaarat kee itanee badee jan snkhyaa hai...to jaahir hai ki baabaaon kee taadaad bhee utanee hee badee hogee!

....log baag agar chaahen to khud hee aise thag baabaaon kee dukaanadaaree bnd karavaa sakate hai...lekin isake lie sabase pahale unhen andh-vishvaas kaa tyaag karanaa padegaa!

( foto googal se saabhaar lee gaee hai!)

....upanyaas 'kokilaa...' kee kahaanee aage badh rahee hai.....
http://readerblogs.navbharattimes.indiatimes.com/mujhekuchhkehnahai/entry/13-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%9C-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%88-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%89%E0%A4%AA%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%AF-%E0%A4%B8

upanyaas kaa baarahavaa pannaa!

hasamukh aur kokilaa..binaa mnganee, pat vyaah!

upanyaas kee kahaanee tej gatee se aage sarakatee jaa rahee hai....hasamukh ne madanaseeng ko paison kee taakat se pachhaad diyaa...kokilaa ke jeevan se aise baahar kar diyaa ki laathee bhee naheen tootee aur saanp bhee mar gayaa!...are!..kokilaa khud hee hasamukh ke saath shaadee karane ke lie raajee ho gaee!....lekin yah shaadee jabaradastee kee hai....aisaa hamaaraa maananaa hai!

....gat post men jaisee ki hamane salaah dee thee...sochane sochane men jyaadaa samay naheen gnvaanaa chaahie!....sabase pahale hasamukh ne hee hamaaree salaah maan lee aur jhat se kokilaa kaa haath pakad liyaa!....kyaa pataa kaheen madanaseeng ekadam se aa dhamakaa to saare kie-karaae par paanee naa fir jaae!

...kahate hai ki shaadiyaan upar se tay ho kar aatee hai!...chalo maan lete hai....lekin upar kisakee kitanee shaadiyaan honee tay huee hai....ye kaun jaanataa hai?...jaise ki kokilaa kee yah doosaree shaadee hai...aur jeevan men teen purush sthaan grahan kar chuke hai....

....fir bhee kokilaa nirdosh hai, nishpaap hai....kismat kee maaree bhee hai aur kismat kee dhanee bhee hai....chalie!...shaadee to aakhir ek pavitr bndhan hai....shaadee mubaarak ho hasamukh- kokilaa!

( foto googal se saabhaar lee gaee hai!)

...kaise?....link dekhen....
http://readerblogs.navbharattimes.indiatimes.com/mujhekuchhkehnahai/entry/12-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%9C-%E0%A4%AC%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%97%E0%A4%88-%E0%A4%95-%E0%A4%B2-%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%89%E0%A4%AA%E0%A4%A8-%E0%A4%AF-%E0%A4%B8